I love that story. It was amazing.

Loved it!

This story is really good.

Awwwwww

Hey. Amazing story. I look up to you as a writer.
You explain everything so well, every minute detail. I hope you grow as an author. Respect

Wow. Just wow. I love this. :) I really felt like I was one of the characters. Luke if that would happen to me, I'd do the same. You're right. Love isn't a weakness. Its strength. I really LOVE IT. :) its amazing :)

This is... Absolutely astounding! Truly Amazing! I love this story!

-LF

I-I can't... I'm... SPEACHLESS

AMAZING STORY!

That- that was so GOOD.
Are you KIDDING me. How do you write so well, bluester?! :D
Amian. Woohoo :DD It prevails in the darkest of situations, doesn't it. xD
Somehow, I think Ian /would/ cry, feel that bad if he happened to kill his parents. Lucians have their weak spots, too.
They both did SO well in the fight, against people older and more experienced. So Vikram was the indirect cause of Isabel's death? That's... unusual. But totally plausible. :)
Are you ending this?! ONE more chapter. Please. A happy one, where they're all talking and planning how to dispose of the bodies or something... :)
GREAT JOB, BLUESTER. :D

Sri

Awwwww... Amazing. Bloody, but amazing :D

Yours in demigodishness,
Demi :)

Dude.

If I could change the past, I could own the 39 Clues series and make you write your version of the final book in the Cahills vs Vespers series.

TOPNOTCH!

I wish there was a 5-star rating system here, and I would have given you FIVE FULL stars.

Is this the end?

SWEET :D Amian, Amian, Amian :D It suits the title. ;)
I like this story. They're all IC, and you have just the right mix of seriousness and humor. And the Amian just makes it better xD
Update soon! :)

Sri

Update Soon!

Continue this is awesome!