Oh, that's nice~ Very sweet. I know this fic is old, and an author it can be hard to appreciate one's older work, but I think you did a good job capturing the emotion of the scene, and I like the way you convey Ur's perception of his surroundings.

What a great story! I felt the same as you as events unfolded after the tournament. It was really heartbreaking to lose all I cared for in the game in such a dramatic way, and I remembered vividly how lost I felt afterwards, and how greatly I wanted to get the spirits and the Book back. Your story perfectly sums up all those feelings, and is beautifully written to boot. Thanks a lot!

This story is very good! It needs more reviews. I feel like this could actually happen in the game and it was so cute! OMG! Ur and Tia should just get together already!

Great fic! I absolutely adore Ur so this fic was an absolute delight.

The characterisation and the story was well within the canon. I was also absolutely devastated in the post tournament cutscene.

Keep up the good work!