I saw the Gurren Lagann reference and had to say *sniffles* your my hero “Go beyond the impossible and kick reason to the curb!”

Whered Kin go and Nagato hooked up with Konan during the event with an unpleasant gangbang before disappearing together. Why is it suddenly Obito instead and it didn't happen?

In what way has Kushina been a fan girl on this story?

If she was a fan girl why wouldnt she put out whenever he was on the mood for sex that hed look elsewhere?

If the programming works that way why didnt it kick in with his opposing her relationship? It said it still works for Minato just that it works for him too so it shouldve done something.

So Mikoto was cheating on dickbag Fugaku with Scumbag neglector Minato who treated Naruto like shit yet despite her caring for Naruto she was happily seeing him?

Uh?

So Ankos a slut for anyone actually being the so called snake whore, Temari was forgotten during the exam amibg the girls and just.. nvm.

Did not know it was going to be a neglect fix. Dont know what started them but all of them have been horribly done with no attempt at making any sense.

Thos one surprised me with an attempt that kinda worked but towards the end that bot of somehow he couldnt also train Naruto and that he wouldnt be worth it anyway without the kyuubis power despite he himself never having it... and yeah it's just no.

Not a fan of the Hinata change either.

I'm all for him being with Tenten. And I got the setup for his sister and mom though I don't know why it's not a full deal seeing as it said occasionally with regards to his mom.

But I'm confused with the lack of any other names. The setup with the description of the list tattoo basically said this is a harem fic with.. a lack of a harem.

I'm surprised you don't see your own potential, this story could be so much more if you expanded on it.

I could see this story go to the span of 30-IF NOT, 50 chapters; each and every one paying attention to detail, fleshing out the characters, building on it, and some actual training. If you could do that, this story could have been so much more. Despite the longevity of each chapters' length, the story is short-lived and barely keeps the reader on their mental toes that forces them to recall previous chapters' information.

You have the potential, and it's all there, but I don't think you truly realize it.

best first exam I've ever seen
my hats off to you

so is minako a boy you keep referring to them as his sons when I think you mean children

This story is a joke

that story was a great one to read so ori what a storyline hope you do write more like this one thanks

Love this

Well, that was rather amusing and different when told about this I expected Naruto to be paired with Bayonetta but oh well still a great story poor Sakura but oh well.

Well, I must say that was truly hilarious a perfect ritual for Sasgay who will always be a loser

Well, that was quite surprising Hanzo the Salamander his pops huh, it's all quite amusing