Excuse me, who gave you permission to end like that?! I certainly didn't! Why do you do this to me? Why! I mean, it's great and all, but the end just crushed my soul, man! WHY?!

This story is riddled with grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. Takes away from an otherwise decent plot.

It's sad they died in the end. I love your story so much. Your one of the best writer on FanFiction. Love you.

Let me first say that I think you're a fantastic writer and that you developed a beautiful relationship between Enjolras and Eponine. It was incredibly believable how they came to be friends, and you broke my heart multiple times throughout, such as when Eponine was beaten nearly to death and when Enjolras felt he had to break Eponine's heart to save her. Those were all heartbreaking and wonderfully written.

However, that ending! I thought that through changing the events leading up to the barricades that this would somehow change the destinies of our protagonists. But I guess not. It admittedly felt a bit rushed and unsatisfying, especially since you had spent so much time getting us invested in their relationship and where it would lead. Honestly, I thought maybe we were going to be mistaken in their deaths and that they'd somehow make it out alive and eventually get to continue where they left off, but then I got to the bottom of the page and saw that it really was the end. Perhaps I'm too much of a sucker for happy endings.

Anyhow, in spite of my discontent with how things wrapped up, this is still going in my favorites because I really adored the way you unfolded things. The chemistry between Eponine and Enjolras was fantastic, and you made me tear up multiple times. I look forward to reading your future works and hope my criticism wasn't too harsh.

Well, that was bitterly amazing. Quite realistic. But I admit, I did hope for a happy ending. Well, after, what? 23 chapters of denial and then acceptance and then they finally admit it-you know, love, and then Enjo dies a bitter death. Well, still amazing, of course.

Wow. This was just incredible. I was in tears by the end of it.

No no no no, madame, this is not ok!
i am fucking crying
omg this is so amazing but sad! whyy? they were perfect together! nuuu

Now really, this is ver well written and it actually made me cry, i love how well every character was. the end was very sad.

I'm crying. Through this whole story I'd imagined that they would find a way out. It was like I didn't want to scroll further down on the page as I realized what would happen. Amazing, brilliant, you are so good. But this is so bittersweet that I have trouble comprehending everything. Just like the real book. Which is why I read all these fanfics - I simply have to believe that they survived. That they won. I rarely cry, but now I'm literally weeping. Thank you, so much. It was a wonderful story, thank you for sharing it.

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This fanfic gave me so many feels :), this was very well written:) you are a very talented writer and I hope to read more fanfictions by you:)

Beautiful ending to a beautiful story, I Can't find a single fault with it :)

The end was so heartbreaking, yet so descriptive that it seemed real. I honestly didn't see that coming.. I hope you write an epilogue to this one day, I think it would be a good closure (not that it isn't already). This story reminds me of Romeo and Juliet a bit :) Good job & please write more!

Wonderful story! Are you planning on writing an epilogue of them reuniting in heaven on something? Truly, you did an amazing job :)

Holy shit. That was amazing.

What. What. ?! NONONONONONO I DIDN'T READ THAT. I DID NOT READ THAT. IM CRYING. IT WAS SO BEAUTIFULLY DONE. IM DEAD. I FEEL LIKE IM THE ONE THAT GOT STABBED IN THE STOMACH. I DIDN'T KNOW THEY WERE GOING TO DIE! I DIDN'T KNOW THIS WAS THE LAST CHAPTER. IM CRYINGGGG. WELL YOUR ENTIRE STORY WAS AMAZING AND I ENJOYED FOLLOWING IT FOR EVERY SECOND THAT I DID. IT WAS PERFECTLY WRITEN. FROM ALL ASPECTS. PLOT, CHARACTERIZATION, EVERYTHING. THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS. AND TEARING OUT MY HEART.

You broke me.

Simple as that.

It was beautiful, and heartbreaking, and I'm now crying, and the last line COMPLETELY finished me, and you didn't even give us a warning!

I am truly sad that this is over; it has been a pleasure and an honour to read. It has been romantic, tragic and everything in between. Thank you for giving us this and I look forwards to any stories you may write in the future.

*salutes solemnly as The Finale from Les Mis plays in the background*

SPAS or Libz