My feels! My heart is broken!

Loved this. I was tearing up the further I read.

Crying so hard right now...

This is really good and its so sad that they have to die so young and cute

I don't even know what to say. All the emotions and feelings I get from this are just overwhelming. This is just fantastic. You did such a wonderful job at capturing this battle. Loved the scene when Fili was trying to keep Kili awake and telling him the story. Just heartbreaking. I read this at work and I had to fight the tears.

Crying.

OMG - gut-wrenching :S

God, you nearly had me in tears - and I don't do crying at most things. Nicely done.

I really like this! (even though I hate that Fili and Kili have to die in the battle...) I still really like it!

When I saw that you wrote for this fandom, I let out a little squee - your Avengers work is too enjoyable for words, and I knew you would do this prompt justice. And you did.

Just . . . my throat is thick with feeling right now. I loved Nar's (yay for obscure characters!) lines about death being like sleeping coming back to them now. The end, with the story, and speaking until he could speak no more . . . There are no words.

Thank-you for sharing this, it is an instant fave. :)

. . . now, I have to go and find tissue.

You made me cry. A few 1% of the stories I read can actually do that. Very well thought out and executed.

Excellent piece of writing and a really great read.

*sob* so *sob* sad! You made me cry! Great story! :)

Aww, that was so sad, but so good! I actually had tears in my eyes during the last section. Both Fili and Kili were perfect; I loved the references to their childhood with Thorin always saving them, and how Fili understands Kili so well.

I really liked the start too, where they're all fighting together and Kili's reflecting on his bow.

Gah, the whole thing was amazing. You should definitely write more Hobbit stuff, 'cos this was great.

Oh my god.. I don't even want to imagine this scene yet, I try not to think about it at all, because I'd never thought I would love these dwarves so much. :(
God, and this.. Seriously, this is so sad but so perfect! And the end, how Fili keeps talking, how he just has to do that because he can't stop.. And when he finally stops.. Oh god, no. :( I really liked it, but I'm very sad right now...