Hi dear author, I wanna ask if you’d allow me to translate this fic and share it on other websites？

This is one of THE best stories in this place. I can’t dven tell you how much this story is close to my heart and it’s not because of the sex but rather Jack himself and the way you made him and kept his character true and went even more in character with him. You did him justice. You did Pitch justice and you did ALL others justice. The emotions, the plot, the mythologies, the entirety of this is so emotional and thoughtful and deeply tragic that it moves me every single time I read it. I always come back to this story. Please do not take it down. It’s too good to be put away. Thank you for writing this.

I really wish that you would remake another version of this in Pitch's POV. I understand why Jack is the main character and the reason behind it being in his POV, but there are multiple times when I want to know what Pitch is thinking. Like when did he know he started having feelings for Jack? What were his exact thoughts when Jack found the locket? What were his reasons when he saved Jack from Nain Roughe? Why was he afraid after Mora's feeding frenzy? Things like that. Anyway, just wanted to give my input. Again, sorry. Still love the story, everytime I read it has got me loving it all over again.

oh my god I love the story so much. Its gold (no pun intended). how there's a new plot but still relating to the original movie plot. the charcter peogression and new sides of the characters. and love how it wasn't rushed; like Jack get together with pitch and didn't suddenly have all his problems solved.
the only critisim I can give is better character description and felt jack was saying I don't want to talk about it a biiit too much

This story is fucking amazing. You've done MORE with the characters and have surpassed my expectations. Everything makes sense. I usuallly hate OC's but the way you write them- I hate them for all the right reasons.

I love the relationship between these two. Pitch's possessiveness is so damn attractive and Jack's suffering is extremely realistic. I love, love, love this story. I wanted to write a nice, eloquent review in the end, but fuck it! I don't have the patience because my love for your fic has pushed me to write this pathetic review. Please excuse my long ass ramblings. You're gifted.

I've just re-read your story and found myself drowning in feels all over again. Gah the cliffhanger is killing me! Can't wait to read the sequel!

Well kudos to North for being so understanding and getting Jack to open up.

I have felt so much like Jack in the past with people coming and going. You really have written a story with strong emotions about relationships and loneliness. I look forward to reading the rest. That and I like Jack and Pitch getting closer together and having a consensual relationship.

I've read this several times, and its never not good. Though sometimes I can't help but wonder what would have happened if Jack was consumed by shadows.

but yeah still loving this story 3

I've recently read a story by another author that had exactly the same plot and details. The Waterhorse Uisge, the schools under attack, Jack with Pitch, the Sanskrit scarf with silver paint that hides fears, etc. Like, it was a mirror. The only difference is that this one is not only more detailed and interesting, but it actually pulls you into the story. The other one seemed like a fan quickly wrote it with terrible grammar and pacing. Too lazy to see who wrote it first, but I like this one MUCH better. It doesn't hurt my brain.

…I'm trying to think of what to say but I'm just…stunned! WHAT AN AMAZING STORY! I've spent the last few days and nights rereading it because I got stuck and WOW, what an ending! It left me wide eyed and breathless! Much kudos(during the times I looked in the dictionary, I learned it's "much kudos") to you, amazing author! Now to run off and read the sequel!

OH MY GOD.
What should I say? Or do? I have no words to describe this perfection.
Maybe after I read the sequel...maybe I'll regain my words then?

GAH!
Youre making this really difficult for me. This story is one of the best RotG fanfics Ive read so far. And I would really, really have loved to read it until the end and then label it as perfect. But unfortunately, thats no longer possible after this chapter. Im fine with Jack and Pitch developing a mutual understanding and forming a father-son-like relationship. And perhaps itd also been ok if that relationship wouldve become more... passionate later. But the way youve described it? No. Thats just not realistic, and since youve attempted and managed to write realistically throughout the rest of the story, it kinda ruins it. I cant get over how well-written all of this is, and how quickly youve made it impossible for me to continue liking it. Because love doesnt work the way youve described it. Yes, theres passion. And yes, it makes you irresponsible. But at some point, soon after, when the adrenaline is gone, you start thinking more down-to-earth. And that point is simply missing in your story. Its like: "Oh, well, Im gay now. Pfft, who cares. No need to waste a thought about that!" And even in a world where homosexuality is accepted in every developed society, its just not that simple. The discovery of ones homosexuality still causes angst and self-doubt. It still causes a feeling of doing something wrong. Im not saying thats how it should be. Its just how it is. Of course, this might be different for Jack Frost, but then that would still need an explanation. So, to conclude, this is still a very good story, but at this point I choose to not continue it because Id rather remember it as a good one with wasted potential than as another unlikeable boyslove story.

Which, yes, I did just belatedly see your ending AN about there actually being a happy ending, but seriously! You'd better not be fibbin'. *sniff*

Nooooooooooooooooo! This is so saaaaaaaad! D,; Whyyyy? Why couldn't you have issued a tissue warning?! *cries* You've literally made me cry - I'm crying right now. This is awful. And I'm not joking, or exaggerating, or anything, like a lot of people do - I'm literally crying right now.

This is what I get for being so emotionally invested in fictional characters. *sniff*

Your sequel better have a good ending, 'cuz I don't think my heart can take much more. I mean, this is an amazing story. Really. It really is. If it weren't, I wouldn't be crying right now. But... god... It's so SAAAAAAAAD!