| Reviews for The First |
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   Schatze8210 chapter 19 . 11/6/2018 Wow! Very creative story, with lots of action and inter-action, epic battles, advanced technology, with just a smudge of romance thrown in, and, of course, a few difficult to pronounce names of individuals and races. |
| Ananya-Talvi chapter 1 . 7/23/2015 This story is absolutely brilliant! I love the idea of former enemies to form an alliance against an seemingly invincible foe. Awesome! |
| LadyMo chapter 19 . 2/27/2013 I will say this was a great story. It was different in alot ways from others I read and I enjoyed every chapter. I love the idea how enemies come together for one cause. thanks for the story. :-) |
| LadyMo chapter 17 . 2/27/2013 Wow, she saved the best from each species so they may live, live together and eventually defeat their enemy. Boy that is something. :-) |
| LadyMo chapter 11 . 2/27/2013 There must be some truth to that. But that means she would have to live forever, interesting. :-) |
| LadyMo chapter 6 . 2/26/2013 The only race in the galaxy. What fun would that be? That sounds very boring to me. :-) |
| LadyMo chapter 4 . 2/26/2013 Anubis. Jack fought hard for not attacking him. :-) |
| LadyMo chapter 3 . 2/26/2013 I am with Jack, who are the First? Good chapter. :-) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/31/2013 This Femal character named Tara sounds mysteriously like a friend I know... her features match and therefore I must conclude... cud be her?! |
| 15meli57 chapter 19 . 1/31/2013 i would like to read how things develop in their new galaxy year by year not just jump 1000 years and some more years and then the battle vs the scail ... i like to read how they go from just them to a whole civilisation of billions of people how they prepare their descendent for the battle that's to come... if Sam and Jack left for Earth so they could tell their people what's to come and bring more people to the planet... :P i like it but like i said i would like more info in how they become the Nua Saol. and if a plant of the planet cure the asgards maybe the humans there live longer than on Earth... i just put that because just thinking of sam and jack death give me shivers XD i am a big S/J shipper!... so if you continue the story i would love to read those things... :') |
| lordessoftime-tau chapter 19 . 1/27/2013 Awesome story! Wish that this was real! |
| Jack chapter 5 . 1/24/2013 so your telling me there is a fleet of uber dreadnoughts and cityships spread across the universe by various race just waiting to be activated so they could kick the Scail's ass!? Awesome! |
| Andriabow chapter 6 . 1/25/2013 Good, I liked more. Thanks |
| dpdp chapter 5 . 1/24/2013 Nice. More please. |
| dpdp chapter 4 . 1/24/2013 Nice. |
