hahahhaha my heart u hurt it this is great i love it oml you're an amazing writer thank you for the pain!3

This is so good!
It's so sad and so well written!
And now I feel sad too!
I see what you did there are well!
With the Would questions, the first, third and fifth rhymed
And so did the second and fourth!
I love this so much!

Too close to the feels... nice.

Wow

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WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in youleleles

That's so sad :c And the music I was listening fitted perfectly with your story ;p

It was wonderful. I loved how you say Naruto died just by two words at the end. And even though it's short, it showed Naruto's feelings and his mask - "as expected from kids his age".

I liked this; thank you.

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So sad. So sweet. So nice.

All of a sudden, I wound how the other characters were to feel about this. ( Guilt, guilt guilt. In my mind of course. Torturing- I mean, imaginating how characters should suffercough cough, act in head shouldn't be shared around so easily )

... that was sad.T.T I liked it, it was pretty good

OH...MY...GOD! BEST EVER! no seriously! it;s poetic, straightforward, heart wrenching and basically AWESOME! Love it!