Reviews for Rise Out Of The Ashes
frankannestein chapter 42 . 10/26/2019
Oh, I don't want to say goodbye. This is the perfect ending!

I love how the silence doesn't scare Lion-O anymore.

How Erica and Pumyra helped shape him.

How he passed on what was left of Omens.

How he made Kit his queen. Warm fuzzies all over!

It certainly has been a ride. Congrats, WAR.

~ Anne
dspprince chapter 42 . 10/9/2019
This was a good ending, but I feel it has one major problem, which being Erica's part in the story.

From the beginning, Erica had been the main lead character of the story as Lion-O was, and just when we finally got the reveal and resolution of her past, she was just quickly killed off and forgotten since nobody but Lion-O remembers her or the impact she had on their lives.

Also I felt that if Lion-O had the cosmic power to revive all the dead characters, he could have also used that power to restore humanity on a restored planet Earth, and that would have been a better ending and still bittersweet.
Lionessa chapter 42 . 10/1/2019
truly an awesome piece and i enjoyed every minute of it... thank you for sharing this with us all... it was a monumental effort i can tell and for that, i thoroughly enjoyed it...
if you ever want to read up on fics starring the 80s series check out my profile here as i have several and i introduced a human into the mix...
till later.. take care and thank you again for this work... well done!
PokeKing Charizard chapter 42 . 9/30/2019
This story has been amazing and worth the rollercoaster ride of emotions. Thank you for giving us this well written saga filling in the leftover blanks from the series.
Heart of the Demons chapter 42 . 9/30/2019
This is a pretty satisfying ending to this monster of a story you've created. Ten years have passed, and already things are coming together for all of animalkind. I've enjoyed the interactions Lion-O had with Tygra, the ghost of Erica, and WilyKit. They certainly helped him to keep moving forward with his life. His passing of the Sword of Omens to his new nephew, Tygas, ensures him and everybody around him that there will always be things worth fighting for. So, my friend, congratulations on pushing through this tale, for making it really entertaining for every reader out there. I certainly am proud to have given it a chance when I could. Your penchant for story and characterization mattered a whole lot for the "ThunderCats" universe. I'd say you've grown up a whole lot as a writer. I think an epilogue for this particular story would've ruined the overall flow of it all. I'm more than happy with how its final chapter played out. Once again, congratulations on writing these characters.
Elise142 chapter 42 . 9/30/2019
A bittersweet and satisfying resolution, particularly the part between Lion-O and Tygra. Echo/Erica’s goodbye especially hits home. Thank you for writing this! But I have a question. At which point in time did Lion-O travel back to and which events played out a second time? You don’t have to answer though, and I get the general idea after rereading it. Thank you again, and I really enjoyed Rise Out Of The Ashes!
Elise142 chapter 42 . 9/30/2019
A bittersweet resolution that is also so satisfying. It concludes beautifully, especially the part between Lion-O and Tygra. Echo/Erica’s goodbye also hits home for me. Thank you so much for writing this, but I have some questions. Which point in time did Lion-O return to? I understand that the fall of Thundera still came to pass, but how many events happened the second time? Though after rereading it, I think I get the general idea. You don’t have to answer. I really enjoyed your story! Thank you again!
The Night Whisperer chapter 42 . 9/30/2019
*tears up* Oh, my goodness ... I can’t believe this is the end. But I’m so happy with how everything turned out. Seriously, I wasn’t expecting Tygra or the others to come back and when they did I was ecstatic. XD I’m also glad that Lion-O was able to move on with his life and find some happiness because I was really worried about him. And as for Erica ... Well, I hope whatever happens Masai and her will still be together. Whether that’d be in the afterlife or the next one because she deserves some happiness too. But all in all this was a fantastic story. So, be proud of all the hard work you put into it :)
suntan140 chapter 42 . 9/30/2019
I am sad to see it end this was an AWESOME story. But it would have be nice to see erica be together with Masai and the others again.
Nathanial1993 chapter 41 . 6/17/2019
Wow...that was incredible! Good work as always! Can't wait to see what happens!
Heart of the Demons chapter 41 . 6/3/2019
What an incredible battle it was between Lion-O and Mumm-Ra you've written out. You wrote it out beautifully and remarkably. This penultimate chapter was everything one could want in a final battle and more. And you've managed to keep Lion-O and Mumm-Ra in character the entire time. Their differing philosophies come out well thanks to you, and I'm satisfied with how well this entire chapter had turned out. The epilogue should be pretty captivating once you release it.
The Night Whisperer chapter 41 . 6/2/2019
I have no idea what to say right now ... Like, my feelings are all over the place. I mean, I knew things were bad right now and that Kit and Kat have been through a lot ... But DAMN! You really put them through the ringer! I almost cried while reading this :( Seriously, they were one of the bravest and strongest characters in this story and I hope their sacrifices weren’t in vain. Anyway, please update soon :)
Elise142 chapter 41 . 6/2/2019
And ThunderCats just got the final battle it deserves. This chapter was adeptly named. Almost to the end. Thank you for updating, and I am looking forward to the epilogue!
PokeKing Charizard chapter 41 . 6/2/2019
What...?
frankannestein chapter 41 . 6/2/2019
Squee! You posted! Congrats, chingu!

This.

Was.

GLORIOUS.

Wow. I didn't know what to expect. Poor Kit and Kat. Made me cry over that, you did. How horribly sad and lonely. I'm glad Kat came around.

It was hard to have to watch Lion-O get past the others, real or not. I needed to grieve for them too. All of them.

Mumm-Ra is some scary piece of something. Markata, though ... I'm glad Lion-O was able to get the truth out of him. It's good to know the reason WHY.

I'm looking forward to that epilogue. See you then!
~ Anne
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