Add more chapters please

it was going really great for me but then the whole Mia Sentinel and Vince guide thing started messing it up. Then making mia and Vince betas when they're new so most likely not the next most powerful (as betas should be by right) made it cliché (which Brian being royalty was already pretty cliche). the last straw for me was the action scenes. They were all lukewarm at best. Maybe tran just wasn't powerful enough or written as dangerous as you made him seem but you made Brian and Dom seem so powerful and someone as weak as tran was able yo knock Dom out and kidnap him and blow up Brian's car and and and and... etc see my point? I give it a 3 out of 5 stars and unfortunately didn't like it enough to read a sequel. However i do admit that it was a fun read at parts. this was meant as an honest opinion/review and not to be offensive or taken as a flame or whatever.

I know nothing of Sentinels and Guides but it sounds really interesting. I hope its explained a little further into the story but so far in enjoying it

I really REALLY like this!

I have read so many time now it that great but where the sequel, I really wanna know what Dom and Brian have in store for them.

Soo good! When are you gonna start the next one? I can't find it in your account. Or is it in another account or website? Please tell me. I wanna know what happens next.

Where do I find the sequel?

I have thoroughly enjoyed devouring this story and do look forward to the sequel. I totally did not see this story coming, had 0 knowledge of Sentinel/Guide but I absolutely love out and the way you wound it around the story of my favorite couple Bri/Dom! Awesome work!

Wow I really loved this story and it was quite interesting and I'm really looking forward for July if you decide to continue do to a sequal but good luck and I hope you do :) great story

I really enjoyed this story, and was going to ask if you could write more stories in this Universe, but you've already hinted on a sequel. So I will be looking forward to reading that sequel and any others you might be thinking of![Hint, Hint! ;0)]
As well as enjoying the plot line, I also liked the way you have written the characters too. The story was nice and chewy, something that I could sink my teeth into, rather than the usual watery fluff that a lot of these stories can be. An enjoyable twist to a familiar fandom. Well done!

Shell.

Amazing story! I love it so much! :D

I can't wait for the sequel! :)

awesome cant wait for the sequel

I love this fic, I can't wait for the sequal

awesome! looking forward to the next chapter, but sux that it's ending!

very cool.