I adore this story! I don't know how many times I have re-read it by now.

Somehow the idea both hero and villain meet before the plot forces them to face off is awesome. That Shogo is obsessed with finding another like him but fascinating because she stays firm in her morals unlike the other people he manipulates is amusing. Akane is so confused and despite adapting quickly to the unexpected stranger's conversation she wants for some common sense here haha

Ah, what a way to place them together, especially because they are so in character. Shogo is still the same selfish manipulative guy obsessed with people outside of the system, and Akane is still the optimistic open minded girl he would have called enemy.

Too good I tell you. :D

I got a good humor and a pleasant romance in this story. I like your premise, story telling and characterisation. It's amusing to see that Makishima is still Makishima by being so weird but also demanding and persuasive in a humor way. Akane is still Akane by stand up for herself and refusing all of the mistreatment she gets. The epilogue is such a tease that you left us with the how but also gives us the humor by the ending. Totally worth a read. Thank you so much for this story!

Omggg that was so great. I loved it. The interaction between akane and shogo, then having kougami at the end. So gooood.

Thanks for sharing!

Omgggg ugh you are killing me with this fic. I adore it.

Thanks for sharing!

Omggggg so cute and so freaking interesting

I mean, is akane still a detective? Is shogo still a murderer?

HOW DOES IT ALL PLAY OUT?!

Thanks for sharing!

Omg this is awesome. This is only my second PP fanfiction and I looooove it. I didn't even CONSIDER THIS PAIRING. WHAT. WHAAAAT.

Thanks for sharing!

enjoyed it a lot! I would love to read a sequel.. :)

I just love this paaring ! So pleas write another fanfichtion with this paaring!

I don't suppose I have presented you with a review yet. I enjoy this story of yours. Gotta love the homeless/mysterious Makishima Shougo who manages to snag Tsunemori Akane for himself. It's quite endearing! It's amusing with their interactions too! Flat refusal don't work. Dashing out doesn't work either. She's without an option! XD

THIS WAS THE BEST THING IVE EVER READ oh my god makishima was the cutest little baby ever uwu my precious child i love this so much

Love love love
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Awww Why no more? What will Shogo do about his jealousy and is there even progress in his relationship with Akane? Thought It's really cute how he got the librarian job he lied about at first just to get closer to her. Thanks!

OMG I love this couple, why wasn't this one the cannon story? T_T

Awww I love it! Truth is I love Shogo more and he was by FAR my favorite character of the series, I really hated Makishima for killing him. Specially since thought he was an extremist his ideas were in the right place, he just didn't have enough allies or even sane ones, desperation to strike action against the system made him reckless.

Oh dear, Kougami baby. But it's nice to see Makishima still be his yandere self though he's getting a little better since Akane-chan's such a positive influence, for better or worse. Their interactions were quite hilarious and thankfully, stalking and courting Akane-chan is much more innocent than what he ultimately did in canon. Never mind that it's probably still going on here.

Bastard reminds me of Byakuran and his insistent use of Uni as his moral compass. Ah well, at least he's interested in seeing what Tsunayoshi and Uni would do than destroying worlds now.