All I can say is MORE!

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Holy crap that was AWESOME! The kisses in the first game were hot, the sex scene was fun, and the gift-giving was super-sweet! I especially love the line about Haruhi wanting the rings on their middle fingers so she could be in the middle of them! Oh how I wish I could see a picture or drawing of their sexy costumes! It’s hard for me to picture Haruhi’s.

* pretends to be Haruhi *

I had to reread this amazing series and honestly there isn't much more I can say. Thus trilogy is amazing and one of the hottest and most interesting stories I have ever read. I love how you write these characters. However I do have one question. Do you have an image reference for Haruhi's dress in this?

I love the tattoo comments and I totally agree with haruhi

Oh wow. I didn't realize you did a sequel to "The Game". This was fantastic and that lemon was seriously juicy.

Yay

Ohhhh how this lovely fanfic made me twirl on my couch! I'm glad I read this first! :3

Oh. My. Gosh. You are officially my new favorite OHSHC author. This fic blew my mind with how amazingly well written it is! I can't wait to start reading the third one in the series :D

hmmm a romanic threesom...nice twist ;3

So sweet and so yummy! Fantabulous job! (I'm not sure if that's a word but just go with it...)

Very good

Wow... i need to sleep now sun up in roughly two hours lol and im going ta be having dreams hahahaha daaamn that is hot but shame you didn't have the boys kiss

well that was rather intertaining.