Aiyaaa. This is nice. I love you the implications of Yao's jealousy. Want more jealousy themed fics. Hmm.

Hahahaaaa ! Oh this is just sweet Cx thank you for the explanations at the end by the way , it helped ! ;3 Very interesting fic , thank you for writing this ! ;D

Hahahaha! Poor U.s! I hope he has learned a valuable lesson today! Never interfere a RoChu moment,u got that Al? You better! XD & Congrats on the revenge Oh the ever-wise Yao!XD

HahaHa. Job well done.

And having had both several times...both their dishes are pretty damn spicy.

How did you get so good writing? Even the most insignificant gesture character means more than words.
I love this image of China! I love that not only Vanya jealous, but Yao too. Oh, but Yao is very artfully cracks down on competitors. In general, the feeling is that they put on a show in front of each other. It was lovely!

Wow, mow that I've read your interpretation of the fic, it's so much more special instead of thinking that Russia did something to America :) Awesome job!

I really like this fanfiction because it can be interpreted in a number of way. I really loved this :D

Type your review , you're not asking for reviews? Sweet! I like that.

I love how you describe jealousy as a disease. Jealousy is hard to overcome and cure, and when not treated, it can just keep getting worse and worse.

(the corner of his mouth began to turn upward.) I love how you describe this- it's like one of those evil smiles that move up slowly, kind of like the Grinch's. :P America's idea of feminism made me chuckle. :P China's smile at the end? Well, Russia's smile earlier seemed like a rather evil smile, so maybe China is thinking about doing something bad.

CRITIQUE AND SUGGESTIONS:

. (the Hero's- which is me by the way- example) 'Hero' doesn't need capitalising here.

. (which is me by the way) I think the line with the hero's example would sound better with this part taken out.

. (its' grip.) You don't use an apostrophe in or after ' its '. The only time you use an apostrophe here is if you're using the contracted form of ' it is ', - ' it's '.
[ It's great! ] [ The dog wagged its tail.]

. (Commies) This doesn't need capitalising.

. (Russia laughed, "If I really needed ) 'Laughed' isn't a dialogue tag, since you can't laugh words. It took me a while getting used to this. However, you can laugh and then say words. You could use this instead:

[ Russia laughed and said, "If I really needed ]
' Said while laughing' might also work, although I think the above method would be better. The same goes for 'giggled'.

. ( contemplating the cockamamie idea.) 'Cockamamie' might sound better as 'ridiculous'.

. (England raised his hand to answer, "I went to pick ) Since England raising his hand to answer is not a dialogue tag, you would put a full stop in place of the comma.

. (The second morning for the meeting) Transitions like this should be worked into the narrative, and so you can replace this with a horizontal line break, since you've mentioned about the second meeting in the narrative anyway.

. (*cough*raepable*cough* loveable) How about you just stick to 'loveable' there and get rid of that horrid 'raepable' , so others, especially any possible rape victims on FF who might come across this story and get extremely upset at what you've written, won't get offended or upset? Try not to use rape for comedy.

I really liked how you described jealousy as a sickness, it was pretty smart! Keep up the good work :D