Damn it. Was someone cutting onions while I was reading this?

Interesting twist with Yinsen at the end. I don’t get if Tony is dreaming, if he’s been working so hard that he is having hallucinations, if Yinsen became a guardian angel, or if Yinsen didn’t really die and returned to visit Tony. Great story!

KNEW IT! Wooo sorry had to get that out. I this is beautiful

I love your story! And as for your disclaimer that English isn't your first language, well, you write as well as, if not better, than most native English speakers. Keep being awesome!

Oh my god, oh my god my heart. You have done it, you have killed me.

On a more serious note, I thought this was amazing. Like, you have no idea how much I love Yinsen, and for being such an integral character to Tony's change, there are hardly any stories about him.

That ending was absolutely beautiful! Wonderfully written.

Oh goodness, my face is wet! I loved it, thank you.

Huh nice I enjoy it.

Beautifully written.

This is my favorite story ever, damn it I need tissues.

This is wonderful. thank you.

Adorable.

Aww... You almost made me cry. So sweet.

Ooooooohhhhhhhh lovely. Yinsen is wonderful.

I don't usually write reviews, but I just had to for this story! It's beautiful! When I got to the end, I had this image of possibly a continuation where the team actually does meet with Yensin and their reactions. Please, please, please!