hey are you going to continue it for months and months have not been updated. we are all waiting for your update soon

I thought this was a Shinji/Rei pairing
So yeah I'm pretty dissapointed
Thats my opinion on this

Great chapter, I hope to next chapters update quickly!

I know it said "strong shinji" and I wasn't expecting some hulking brute that mows down all obstacles right away, but perhaps more like wasn't going to let him be walked over specifically by toji and misato, I do like that he's a bit snarky and can drive, and that rei likes him, its rather hard to find an eva fic with those things in it but I do like it so far

That got dramatic REAL quick. I LOVE IT!

this keeps happening... GOD FUCKING DAMNIT.

I JUST WANT AN EVANGELION FIC THAT'S STILL GONNA UPDATE!

I'm just waiting for shinji to kick asuka's ass, then proceed to take Rei on a date

I'm sorry, I'm leaving this. I do not like anything Misato, I'm honestly shinji and I would have killed her.

Well, despite it's flaws, some incongruencies, (as other reviewers have mentioned), and a considerable amount of grammatical errors I was enjoying this story. I really liked the different Shinji, a nice change away from the canon. I was hopelessly hoping for a Shinji/Rey pairing, however I was disappointed that you will be consider them siblings. All that tension about each other liking and having feelings for the other amounted for nothing. And such were my hopes in this story, that waiting for the, nonexistent, moment that they would give in to each other has left me highly unsatisfied. When I found out that it would be Rei/Toji I was disappointed further, but that is just me.

Other than that, as an author I have to commend you for the length of chapters and story overall, as well as the content and the details. It could do with a bit of editing and rethinking some other details, but it was good, (I can only attest this up to chapter 7).

Well, thank you for the story and all the best!

Hope that this is updated soon.

While I like the story premise, your grammar and paragraph structure is painful to read. I'm sure the later chapters are better, but please consider giving your earlier chapters some TLC.

Fantastic story. I hope it gets finished!

Great idea and story but your grammar is lacking.

Especially when it comes to comma usage in dialogue.

You use spell-checker too much

Perhaps you could read through things once more?