Why are my reviews always missing some words i typed?im sorry if my 1st review doesnt make any sense bcoz of some words is ff doing this is to me..uwaaah~ (T.T)
This is the reason why i dont review much even f wanted to

Your story is great & i love OC Akima is good.A mix of a responsible teen w/ a good humor.& its good to read that you didn't rush their i have to point out that most times the change of scenery is she was school arguing w/ Rukawa then w/o a warning,it suddenly changed to her taking to her mother -
"He watched her go, baffled. That's quite a show of appreciation. If that got her punching and spitting, he wouldn't want to know her reaction when she got home later on.

She was positively livid. "WHAT?!"

Her mother beamed at her. "Isn't that good news?" she asked cheerfully. "I never dreamed it would happen."

I suggest put on or write "Time-skip or -at Akima's residence" anything to perhaps to let the reader's know when the scenery changes & wont confuse us on why she suddenly talked to her mother when she was just school not a minute honestly,i love this story.

It was cute though really never a fan of rukawa but I like how you potrayed him here. Good bless. :)

Hey! I read this story at least 5 years ago, I've been looking for it because I forgot to add it in the faves list! then I tried again after five years! haha, I'm so happy I found this very wonderful story!

Just finished reading your story and well, i LOVE it! Good job there! *claps*

Hmmm, interesting.
I'm not really the generation that grew up with Slam Dunk, and I just know it thanks to my little brother and I love it!
Great start. !

I was just thinking how this was published when I was three years old... Ahahahaha. Well, a good story is a good story no matter how old it becomes. Keep up the great work! :) (I just started reading twelve year after the publishing date.)

I realized I read this fic before and it's really nice read to read back. It's really sweet and brought back memoriea when I was majorly crushing on Rukawa. Thanks for writing this :)

i luv poor you!

This was great!1

i know it's been so long since the story met the end.. but i read it and i love it.. really..

i love your fic! 0

oh! oh! oh! it's sendoh! yay! hehe

oh! i love this story! i'm only in the third chap and it's so nice~! and it's not a gay fic! i don't enjoy yaoi much. and it's hard to find non yaoi rukawa fics. TT

i'm so glad i found this one! i like how rukawa's portrayed so far. so sweet!

But what I don’t understand is why because of money, some people can’t even afford to be human.”

- is this line original? Nice. My fave dialogue here in FFN (and I've been here for 8 years! since 12...) how old are you?