| Reviews for Bleached Shinobi |
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silver.blast96 chapter 4 . 5/10 What a shitfic lol belongs in the toilet |
jahlil chapter 2 . 8/2/2019 there should be more than 17 chapters to this story |
Kel000 chapter 1 . 7/5/2019 Really dude... naruto just met him and he’s already giving him a journal on HOW TO BECOME IMMORTAL and what chakra is and how to use it and different skill sets like really what the heck dude. He literally just met them and he’s giving out ALL his secrets. He didn’t even have to tell him he’s immortal . A huge flaw for this story dude and kinda ruined it . |
Fgougeon chapter 1 . 1/17/2019 Kisuke could not use chakra because hes a spirit and dont have physical energy and because of that cant make chakra. |
brebre99 chapter 5 . 10/16/2018 Awesome i love it! |
Tenma Sosei chapter 10 . 10/15/2018 Lost me when you gave Nel to Ichigo. |
Borello chapter 14 . 10/6/2018 damnit. the story is great and i hoped to read more chapter. |
XenoLucifer chapter 1 . 9/19/2018 I hate waist length hair on dudes. |
STARFIREPUDDING chapter 8 . 9/17/2018 hope the sexy-jutsu is in here. there is no prankster Naruto without it! |
Klexxsny chapter 9 . 5/14/2018 If your not going to let naruto use is ninja attacks then why have him still have chakra there's no point |
Monster King chapter 14 . 1/3/2018 Shame that you gave up on the story. |
Time Emperor chapter 1 . 12/29/2017 I hate you. I hate this story... for the few sentences I read. I saw so little dialogue that I feel I need to go on a killing g spree just to release some much needed frustration. go die. |
Natsubi chapter 2 . 9/8/2017 its too late to respond to the poll, im sure, so ill just say this... fuck |
sanjeev.nair chapter 3 . 1/10/2017 Your story itself is quite fun but please be a dear and get your stuff proofread... the spelling mistakes and errors quite troublesome to sift through... make it simple for the readers to follow through... Anyways, cheers and continue the good work. |
Meltricon12 chapter 1 . 1/9/2017 story is great except that naruto is too arrogant |