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Guest chapter 151 . 9/9 This is, indeed, a nice story. But if I have one contention to make: it's a scary thing to EVER say that "I hate you, you make me sick!" is ever justified, no matter the circumstance, save for cruel intent on the part of the person saying it. That's a dangerous line of thinking to make, even for a "sadist" fic like this, and I imagine it would be hard to justify where the genders reversed. |
craytherlay chapter 132 . 9/8 And now that im rereading the Final Uiharu arc chapter... damn, I just realized, It's very possible that Kamui may break Misaka in order to see if that would in turn Break Touma (Yandere Misaka to shatter a young Touma?) due to Touma's nature that would hurt him, however I actually feel sorry for the bastard, No matter what he could possibly try, *he won't in any possibly way be capable pf breaking Touma* even a God was unable to and she broke because of it, there was only one thing capable of breaking Touma and only god can achieve it, Though i suspect telling him that would only cause Kamui to go into overdrive to see if he can break himself |
craytherlay chapter 131 . 9/7 Rereading still, and I Realize... what may have actually happened when Uiharu asked to be saved, she awoke the Dragon, Gakusha had tried to "Steal" from "The Dragon's Hoard" and payed the price, at this point Touma saw Uiharu as "His Treasure" in a way, so anyone trying to harm her would in essence be "Stealing" from him, when he looked at her (Kamijou no Touma) he was checking the state of his "treasure", and how much punishment needed to be dealt out on the "Thief". If Gakusha had not cried a heartfelt wish to not Die and thus appealed to the part of the Dragon KnT that was Touma, Im pretty sure he'd be dead, no questions, he'd either be salt pillared, soul burned or one of the other many Dragon effects. But In that Moment Touma's essence as a Dragon was awoken and it's Unrivaled rage at the Idea of someone touching it's treasure without it's consent was unleashed, Uiharu felt fear for the same reason as the "Damsel" that the Dragon Kidnaps feels fear |
craytherlay chapter 130 . 9/7 While Rereading this, when I reached the scene where Touma has his first PTSD attack my brain says "You know, the Anime Re:Zero, has the PERFECT piece for this" so, I played Call of the witch for Touma's PTSD, I was right... it fit, perfectly |
craytherlay chapter 126 . 9/7 You sir, Truly are a Touma sadist, and you play his misfortune PERFECTLY god I love rereading, Touma: Gets home from England, then gets kidnapped by a bus, only to be WHACKED onside the head by Uiharu who mistook him for the genral |
craytherlay chapter 123 . 9/7 Rereading does often uncover some very intruiging things, Aliester Told Kamui, to "Favor the girl" when winning MINUS to their side, And well (Sounds like they want her to be able to use Touma) also based on the "Five Object" The weapon itself may have all it needs, but it still needs a Pilot, I wonder if that Means Kamui not only will use Hayashida to manipulate Touma, but make her the "Elite" for the Object? |
craytherlay chapter 121 . 9/6 You know, Dispite them being Named, Logic and Deduction, they REALLY fail where it matters, Heck they failed the moment they said their job was to "Not Trust" cause thats absolutely wrong, the job of a internal affairs person like them is to sort the Trustworthy, from the Untrustworthy, The fact they assumed they had all the info was a "Leap in Logic", which is how I'd tell it to them, and thus you can "Deduce" that because of their failure to obtain all the info before hand they have failed in their duty... and I'd say it to them, just like that, Just to rub it in their face. because it's true. also they are missing one thing, Instinct, Logic, Deduction, and Instinct, Instinct allows one to notice when something is missing, something is wrong, heck If i noticed, Deduction only could "Deduce" that Hayashida and Gakusha were up to something, AFTER Misaka's "Instincts" told her something was wrong and she ponted it out |
craytherlay chapter 118 . 9/6 You read this, and then Feel REALLY SORRY for the MINUS members who had GROUP sent after them, there was literally no winning in that situation. Only, Pain, Suffering, and terror |
craytherlay chapter 113 . 9/5 Something I noticed while rereading Uiharu's arc, when she ends up talking about Touma being "Alone" in his suffering and probably (absolutely) wishing for someone who could relate to him I remember "He has Othinus now" so where he was once alone, he is no longer he now has someone who has shared equal pain to him sure she inflicted the worst possible pain onto him but she also had already had that pain inflicted on her and ended up changing for the better. So it's heartwarming as well as Ironic that Uiharu saying that is outdated info, however from everyone els's perspective, it's true, after all, how could anyone els Know that Touma met someone who Understood him? it was a eternity, that took place in a instant |
craytherlay chapter 110 . 9/5 Im Rereading the Uiharu arc right now and Then I remember because of the current Railgun manga arc, Dragon Uiharu... will that ever bee seen in your story There are a few times in this arc for her that seems to fit where the power that aclot of people assume is one of the Dragons released during the Daihaisie would show itself or flicker itself into view like a mirage of the horns and leaves as well as the giant flowers, and based on what i've seen in the manga she used it to control entropy (terrifying) however because of when this was written I doubt we'll see that, Though A Shudan Kimi arc may be interesting if she's still alive |
Formboy1 chapter 159 . 9/1 This is a great chapter with feel goods! ...but we all know that things are going to hell fast. Jesus, I am really concerned anbour how Kihara F*cking screwed with Touma's arm. Don't wanna know the long-term reprecusions that will spawn from that. But glad he's at (more or less) 100% now. And Accelerator visited Touma! Makes me feel like they're getting closer, as friends! Picking up your friend from the hospital after he has been released is a friend thing that Accelerator did! Even though he'd deny it and he has 100% alternativce reasons for doing so, I still like the prospect here. How far could Uiharu gone with that Rainbow Destroyer?! And Touma's blacklisting from prision was mentioned! Loved the reactions there! And the dreaded day of Logic & Deduction is close! Uiharu! Fight on! Misaki and Kongou's meeting went better than both expected! And Misaki's reaction at the end there! LOVED IT! (On an... unrelated topic, I recenly finished Astral Buddy, and am now wondering when the possibility of a Junkou arc is gonna happen. Unfortunately not anytime soon conidiering thois is the FIRST PART of, juding by your enthusiam, a great arc!) Kongou-san, you have no idea the compition for that man is! I was actually recalling who the three blood samples were and got them right, then you revealed it! It was like taking a test, and immediately getting a perfect sdcore back! (Okay, maybe not that great, but still felt good). Shutaura Sequenzia & Meigo Arisa... I have not thought about them in a LONG while... Glad to hear things are going relatively well for Shutaura! The "sleepwalking" DEFINATELY is creepy, I'd be scared half-to-death if that were happening to me! Pfft, of course she got 'bigger there'. This is the Raildex-verse we're talking about! Looking at Shutaura's current mental situation, it is of no question that Kihara (F*CK) would have an interest in her mind. God save her. Pfft, Orion as bait. That was a comedic scene if I ever read one. Loved the audible curse he let out riigghhht before he got tackeled! That kid! Took me a bit, but he's the one from the False Arc in NT! Haven't thought about him in... abouyt a month actualy! I went back to read the scene about Othinus demanding a Doll House, then remembered the kid and Touma's first encounter and re-read that too. Good times. That explosion just kicked the damn hornet's nest didn't it? Getting the attention of Batya Sitara means the confilct shall- no WILLL excilate exponentiallty in the fuiture... Touma JUST got out of the hospital for God's sake! Ugh. ...I actuall read a short doujin (non-ero) about a week ago. Based on Touhou where one of the few (and byu few I mean FEW) cannonicaly male characters, Rinnosuke Morichika, is basically a harem protag, (one where he is just annoyed by the constant attention). Basically it takes place in a dream world where he lives out his fantasy. A silmple day to read a book (a picture book about 6 pages long) and drinking some tea, while lamenting that he can only finish a book in his dreams. Did I mention he likes reading? Reminded me that normalcy is a goddamn virtue for some people (Touma Kamijou). on the off chance you wanna check it out, it's called Rinnosuke Manga by Hidefu Kitayan. Look for the latest one as of 9-1-2020, otherwise it'll be a while until you get there. GT2. EPIC. Loved it! The single-body tagteam between and TOuma was SICK! St. Toumain was sick! Sucked that it was destoying his body the entire time. I hope there comes a scenario where Misaka and Misaka learn that Index is an absolute fountain of knowledge when it coems to what they are currently wanting to know (i.e. magic). I think it'd be cool. ... bactreria is gone huh? I liked him a lot. I HOPE #6 isn't Aogami. I hope Kamachi-sensei is just being a troll. I dunno why, but I just... DON'T want this to be the case and I don't know why. Strange. Anyway, I hope things will get (relatively) better for Touma and everyone in the coming future, (probably won't). Here's to a fun arc! ..if you are THIS excited for this arc, is this gonna be another Uiharu Arc Monster in lenght?! Pftt, proibnably not Senpai! Well, until next time... see ya Senpai! Kamijou Touma received Tetris Nanomachines Arm (Left) (Tampered)! Kamijou Touma's STR & DEF increase by 1%! Kamijou Touma's future... MISFORTUNE! God, I love (J)RPGs. |
AnimeLord127 chapter 147 . 8/25 For some reason, this entire scene is better than Food Wars. And I like Food Wars. How did you come up with this masterpiece? |
Red Glasses chapter 156 . 8/20 POV: Red Glasses swears he has written every single review for each following chapter but FFdotnet didn't register and now Red Glasses is in dismay. All that time spent on writing review. Gone, like the ashes of the sea. |
Red Glasses chapter 156 . 8/20 [And that sentiment was shared by the girls who stood around Kamijou's hospital bed, staring silently in shame.] shame """"""""shame"""""""" Haha wat And to bring up videogames after losing an arm. Kamijou, you are a psychopath. You're gone, you've gone mad. Like, I don't know man, he just lost an arm. I would have felt a graver emotion than shame if someone close to me just lost a freaking arm. They were acting literally the same every arc before, but this time many people died EXCEPT not only that, he fucking lost his goddamned arm! Isn't that messed up? Do they even truly care about Kamijou? He's 4/5 in piece! It's like they don't care if literally the only thing left is his head supported by life support. But more than this, what a short chapter! Anyway, I don't know what mental gymnastics you had through making this chapter but holy shit, this was a messed up chapter. Like, messed-up-in-the-head chapter. I don't know what I had just went through but it's so, so messed up. There's so many things very, very not right in this chapter. Like it was a craft of a madman. I am at awe and horrified. How did you make something like this and think it's alright? But looking past that, call me a guy with a schizoprenia, but that call between Touman and Kongoudad was a classic, reading that part was a dime-in-a-dozen (you know, cuz it's read at the climax or in the end of the arc). And that Kongou afterglow was a cake on top, figuratively just because of how disastrous this chapter was. I mean, Kongou got her ending, but this shit is not worth it. I think she only sees the 'hero' side of Kamijou. Don't me at his misfortune, because what Kongou wrapped up in her conscience was her guilt and responsibility at the consequence of HER actions. Nothing about was him but her full of redeeming herself. She only got to properly look at Kamijou in the eyes after he said his salvation words. I don't know if I'm wrong here, but I felt there was truly no communication, no connection between Kongou and Kamijou. All of their dialogue is just one side of info-dumping, one-sided lecture and being at the brunt of misfortune and shenanigans. It's just one trying firing compliments without properly reciprocating the other. Nothing about your portrayal of Kongou Mitsuko made her unique from the other. I felt so bad that it left a tasteless taste on my tongue. Or is it just me not comprehending her character, carefully? It's like nothing has started between them, nothing was established. Hell, they didn't even talk to each other. It was purely reactionary and nothing about between each other had an impression ingrained in their person. They failed to get along because no one between them took a first step intending to know each other. That's because they never did solve the problem back then, they were keeping up faces but that's not the point that because of that they failed at keeping up the facade of the couple. They didn't do it for the other but for each other's benefit (at least to Touma). It felt like they were dancing but they were not interacting or dancing together. But doesn't mean they should strive for being a couple, what I want is the foundation of the relationship that every arc has it. The others worked (this is where I lose the argument) because they were characters who pre-established relationships with Touma. They already had known each and thus the relationship building between them was merely only a supplement, that; and what they swore on their bonds that sealed the foundation of their relationship. This is the problem with Kongou, unlike Mugino with Hamazura, it doesn't mean anything when they already hadn't even met each other for once even if she was friends with Mikoto, it doesn't hold meaning to anything. They never each other and So I was hoping you would be able to provide (though thinking rationally, you would need another arc reserved for Kongou). If Shirai was present (even if she was present she wouldn't be fully utilized), they would create a banter that would create notions what is she like when she isn't with Kamijou. Heck, the whole time she was very formal and respectful to Kamijou, her haughty attitude was mind-numbingly unfounded. This is bizarrely the most fucked-up endings to an arc, I don't even known what went through your mind when you made this chapter. Did you gear up the wrong cog that time? Anyways, thanks for the chapter. It brings my heart joy seeing you upload again. See ya. |
Chris chapter 1 . 8/20 Not much to say on this chapter other then Kamijou-sama lol Kongou didn't just catch the kami disease she's been straight up infested with it lol Touma and his ability to attact ojou's is unmatched as usual XD. |