Reviews for The Ketchum Inheritance
n.j chapter 1 . 1/23/2015
I want to let you know that I'm mainly a Pokeshipping fan. It would've nice for Ash & Misty to be married, like they wanted to in a story that took place before this one. And I blame Giovanni for coming between Ash & Misty. So I think I have an idea for a fanfic you could do. It could be one like this, only a Pokeshipping version. So I want to ask you a few things. 1. Who were the villains in this fanfic? 2. What became of Giovanni? 3. Whatever became of Misty and her child? 4. Where are they now? 5. Does Misty or Ash still have any feelings for each other? If so, what kind? Be sure to answer these questions.

N.J.
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 31 . 10/29/2013
A great way to end this story!
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 30 . 9/23/2013
A very interesting chapter to read. I really hope Ash can help out Cilan and his brothers! I'm really hating Giovanni and Kamon now.
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 29 . 9/8/2013
Interesting chapter here!
lucarioADV chapter 28 . 8/20/2013
Wait a minute..are you suggesting what I think you're suggesting? Cilan is going to die? These two chapters were great, plus it's cool you updated the story with two chapters! A treaty huh? It really does sound interesting. You have me even more hooked onto this story than before! Can't wait until the next update!
Blazetile chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
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WhiteEagle1985 chapter 27 . 8/16/2013
Another interesting chapter to read.
lucarioADV chapter 26 . 7/30/2013
You're so cruel! You left us with a huge cliffhanger! We now know that slowly but surely the marriage between Iris and Cilan is becoming undone. Seems like Kamon is close to getting what he wants;Iris. This is becoming quite the story, and it has me totally hooked! Great job! Can't till the next one!
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 26 . 7/30/2013
Interesting chapter...
lucarioADV chapter 25 . 7/24/2013
WOW. Cilan has a huge case of paranoia, he thinks everyone is out to kill him. What was Burgundy's role again? Lady in waiting? So with May shaking hands with Iris, this pretty much signifies the end of the war right? This was a pretty good chapter since it leaves the readers with lots of question. It gets you excited to see the next one! Can't wait!
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 25 . 7/24/2013
Interesting chapter here.
lucarioADV chapter 24 . 7/23/2013
Oh snap! Kamon at least in my opinion just made a great first impression. I still get the feeling that May doesn't have the mentality to go into war but that's just my opinion. So Govanii really doubts that Cilan is truly in love with Iris. Heck Cilan's brothers are actually nervous. Point one to Kamon. Great job, and I absolutely love these quick updates. Keep it up with the great work, and can't wait for the next chapter!
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 24 . 7/23/2013
Interesting chapter here.
lucarioADV chapter 23 . 7/22/2013
Holy Crap! Kamon stole the triforce pieces! What does this mean, maybe he plans on joining Iris and ruling the world! And poor May, she really seems like she intends to go to war, but I don't really think she'll handle it mentally. Anyways, great chapter and you got me hooked! Can't wait for the next!
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 23 . 7/22/2013
Sounds like trouble to me...
Great writing here!
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