What happens next? Will the platform live or will it be let to rest in peace?

Good Chapter!

Haha, great beginning

Awwww so cute!

So I think this story has a lot of potential, and I like Pyxis character, in general. However, the dialect is driving me up a tree. I think that writing about her quirky style of speech would serve the story better than always deploying it. Plus I keep giving her an accent of an inbred Scottish gutter punk.

I really, really like this story, please just ease up on the dialect.

Thanks

please keep going i really like this story so far. i also love how you portray the accent sounds like something you would hear down south. i know because im from Louisiana and im telling yall that even though i have lived here for five years now people say i have an accent since i used to live in the central valley in california. as far as i know i dont have an accent... do i?

Keep going! Write more! This is so awesome, I wanna see another Haruh!

Really? I thought Gidgit meant gadget idiot. *shrugs* Oh well.