Very sweet and definitely in character for everyone . Thanks for sharing!

WOW!

Wow, this was great, no BRILLIANT! Really, I'd love this to be a real episode of Cabin Pressure! I could her the real voices in my head saying your words. Honestly great piece of work.
I made the -I soon realized- great mistake to read this somewhere, where I couldn't laugh out loud without everyone starring at me. So I had to contain myself so hard, I was the whole time shaking and squealing so much the people around me must have thought I was seriously ill ...or mad. XD
Thank you so much for this story. My favorite of Cabin Pressure!

Wow... just wow XD You should totally write some more episodes, I can't believe how perfectly in character everyone was! Awesome plot, I sorta ship Martin/Douglas as well ;)

Oh Douglas! Oh Martin! Martin is really adorable and Douglas knows just what to do and say! I love this fic! :)

Excellent dialogue. Tone of voice is the hardest thing to get right, but you're bang on with these voices. I hope you do some more.

Oh God! That's sweet! And exactly how Douglas would get Martin to go on a date with him! You are a brilliant writer! You are brilliant!

I really loved this story. Absolutely enjoyed it and it has to be one of my favourite stories ever. This was just really brilliant :D.

Why are there tears on my face, why is my heart so fluttery, what is going on wHAT DID THIS FIC DO TO ME?

*dies* this was so cuuuuuuuuuuute!

Excellent, well done. Especially liked the line about the horse. Very convincing Douglas. Thanks for the read.
-Sef

:o) Thanks a lot for this.

Absolutely fabulous! You really nailed Douglas on this especially but Martin and Arthur too...well done! The banter was first rate and the plotting was spot on...loved it!