I really like it.

You are a really great author. I was just reading some of "Alex's" writing in Stormfrobt 2, and you are a very good poet as well. I also like how you seem to be sending a gender/sexual orientation equality message as well. As a person who is bi, it's nice to read some more openminded stories.
doactionsneedreasons

This is original and inspiring! You GO!

This is incredible and so original! I love your writing :)

Are you a dancer?

Loved it! Glad that Alex is finally happy, after everything.

that was wonderful and well worth the read

I likeD

I have to admit, I liked this. I hope you write more, as this feels a lot like a set up for a strong, multi-chaptered plot-driven story.

Your grammar was mostly okay, but you do have a habit if forgetting speech marks. Also, just occasionally you get so lost in the speech that you forget to talk about the characters reactions. There was one point when Alex said 'I survived' and I wasn't sure if it was careless (he shrugged) or intense (he said, darkly) or just wanting to move on (he said, quietly, looking down at the table). Any would have fitted. But apart from this completely understandable trait - which I do all the time! - it was good. A really enjoyable read, and original as well! Thank you for posting.