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I thoroughly enjoyed the experience of this comical story. Especially the way the characters were made to stick to their personalities :-)

That was absolutely amazing and I'm laughing so hard right now!

Hey, so I'm an Indian too! Not that it matters, but yeah.
So this was really nice, and sweet, and I'm off to read your other stories

Nico nico nico...

ahahahahaha percy and thalia oh my gods that was so great it was honestly the perfect ending great job i really love this book so far keep up the amazing work PLEASE UPDATE SOON

Poor Nico... but hey, if Percy can go all Poseidon water power and Thalia all BOOMBOOM explodey stuff Zeus power, than whos to say he cant call up a few friends for assistance?

YES!
I love it...
Sooooo much!
Brilliant...
Absolutely brilliant...
Keep writing!
-Om

Lol this is cutr

Thnx for all your as I said earlier I wrote this in school with one of my I couldnt really write much.
I'll work on my writing.I know its horrible but I'm working on it.
I'm also working on another going to be Perlia with Percabeth in the beginning and hints of nicabeth.I'll post it soon.
Thnx again for all your reviews.

I loved it immediatly! Please continue!

Awsome i always wondered what would happen if Thalia left the hunters

It was really good. It could have been even better if you lengthened it a bit, dwelling on the serious parts more to give it more depth. They moved on entirely too quickly, which made it feel kinda fake and shallow. The rest was awesome!

LOL. Cute! But the plot was a bit funny. Was the plot about the paint stuff or Thalia quitting the Hunters?

P.S. It would help if you used some punctuation marks...and spaces.

Keep writing!