i know right? phantom rouge is awesome and I absolutely love Retz. I saw that you were planning to post two hxh fanfics, do you mind sending me the links once you have posted them? I saw that you have about 60 fics on you profile and my phone lags too much for me to scroll down them all.
as for this fanfic, I really like it! Kyou is actually one of my favorite characters from cfv.

Bermuda Triangle! JK! No but really?

YOUR REALLY GOING TO CUT IT OFF THERE?! Sigh. PLEASE PUT A PART TWO FOR THE EPILOGUE!

this is a question, can someone please answer it? is underdoghero (the author) written a sequel? or is going to write one? and if they are going to, around when will it be up? please someone answer I really loved this story and read all of it... twice...on the same day. so yeah I would really love a sequel to this story and hopefully still told in Kyou's perspective. ( and a few with madoka ) and I understand that the author is probably very busy but I just want to know IF there is going to be a sequel so I have something to look forward too big thanks to whoever can answer this as soon as possible!

WOOOOOOO! GOOD FINISH MAN!

LEGION MATE ENDING WAS TOTALLY AS SWEAT AS A PINEAPPLE DIPPED IN SUGAR! But way to go man! Good chapter! How long till it ends might I ask?

There's a second season to this? Yes! Wow, I was wondering how you were gonna wrap it all up especially since some other parts haven't been explained yet. I can't wait to see the next season of this.
On another note I better watch the second season of CFV so I can understand the next installment.
See ya next chapter! :)
P.S. No typos in this chapter. Nice job!

Time feels like it passes really slowly in ADT, now that I sit back and think about where CFV's plot is right now. Must be all those filler chapters.

Typo near the end of the chapter: "I've hung out with *your* for too long to decide that you're an asshole just because you're related to that guy."

...Did I read the end of this chapter right? National tournament!? :D

Only three more chapters to go? Aww...I love this story! Well, it'd be pretty interesting how you wrap up all the loose ends. Good luck with that. ;)
So Kyou found out already huh? Nice job with that scene. You could totally see how much Kyou has matured over the course of the story. Awesome! :))))
See you in the next chapter! :)

Nice story. :) I like the OC's especially Madoka. Make the lit club watch a replay of kai and kyou's match. It ill be interesting to see their reactions.

Make the lit club watch a replay of kai and kyou's match

Yo! ;) Nothing much to say about this chapter, but the bit with the Psyqualia is interesting and also the part with Kyou going to regionals tomorrow. I can't wait to see that scene! :) you watch Free! too? That is so awesome! Now I'm even more pumped up to see the regionals chapter and why Kyou is javing headaches.
See you next chapter! Keep it up! ;)
P.S. Wow, you bake cookies? Nice! All I can do is burn them. -_-"

Words fail to describe the shock i feel right now so I'm just gonna settle for the next best thing which is screaming like the fangirl I am. Excuse me.
KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
Alright now that's out of my system...ADT is almost over? Awww...Really? Well, might as well enjoy what will surely be some intense chapters. :) Let's see how Kyou reacts when he finds out Madoka's 'relative'. Man, I am imagining his face right now and it is hilarious! :)

OH MY DEAR SWEET CHEESE ENCRUSTED STARFISH BATMAN!
Card Capital?! Asdfghjklagdhdkkdfl The plot thickens!
Dude, this story just got a whole lot more interesting. The characters just got more mysterious and that reveal in the end was super shocking! Man, I can't wait to see how this progresses. :)))
You misspelled 'school' during Madoka's monologue about tutoring Akio. Other than that this chapter is completely erro-free!

I'm suddenly filled with regret that you didn't get this posted on Kyou's actual birthday.

"What's up with you assaulting me with nature?" is probably my new favorite line of dialogue in this story. I don't even remember if I had an old favorite, but that doesn't matter.

「今日はキョウの・・・！」 THIS JOKE DOESN'T TRANSLATE WELL INTO ENGLISH, BUT IT WAS THE FIRST THING I THOUGHT OF ONCE MADOKA OPENED HIS MOUTH.

...The scarf is kind of nice, but... Tetsu, you couldn't have sent something more in-season? (Psst, you have to send me the alternate version of this chapter.)