Reviews for The Legend of the Avatar
Exigence chapter 10 . 7/6
The story is really good and I'm enjoying the premise of Korra taking the place of Aang. I was a bit sad to see Katara get kidnapped like that. I'm definitely looking forward to Korra's interaction with Toph, as they are both pretty hardheaded.

My only critique is that the cursing is really out of place and doesn't fit the personality of any of the characters. Getting rid of them altogether would be my suggestion, as they dont add to the dialogue and really breaks otherwise very well written dialogue and narrative descriptions.

Even having Zhao curse like he did seems out of place, as he's actually very well mannered and tactful, and only loses his temper under specific conditions as demonstrated in the show's Agni Kai. Also, having Zhao lusting after Katara just seemed out of nowhere and there could be better ways to portray any negative qualities he may have. It seems really forced.

Besides that, though, the story is very good and I hope you continue it.
Ari H chapter 8 . 6/2/2019
love this story, I can't wait till you update it again! if you do I haven't finished reading yet so I don't know if it's done for good yet!
Lauriverfanboy1 chapter 10 . 4/25/2019
Please update this soon.
Enid Hywel chapter 10 . 3/19/2018
WOW that is actually pretty cool. The whole concept is interesting and I find the dynamics really awesome actually.
Guest chapter 10 . 12/24/2017
Merry Christmas and may God bless!
Tara Girl 23 chapter 10 . 12/15/2017
YAAAAASSSSS LOVE IT!
Guest chapter 10 . 10/14/2017
I enjoy it this story very much! Thank you
And can you post a warning about which chapter, if any, has rape in it? I agree it should be talked about and it's something that should be acknowledged, but it brings back overly bad memories for me, so please leave a warning before hand so I can't skip past that part.
Anyways, thank you for updating and for taking your time to write this story. May God bless!
Mogor chapter 10 . 10/12/2017
Yes Yes another Chapter. Keep it up. More chapters.
FFAmbassador2017 chapter 9 . 7/21/2017
This is great! please update soon - or I won't have much to read in a very long time... )
codexrun chapter 9 . 7/19/2017
could have been a great story sad do see you abandoned it no updates for 4 years yeah thats abandoning
Anjay chapter 9 . 7/6/2017
Please update soon! This story is really good so far, and the plot is amazing! Even though you've only posted 9 chapters Ive become a huge Sokka/Korra shipper. I know its hard to get motivated when writing a story, but if you try to update at least once every month or so this story will probably be one of the best Avatar the last Airbender fics out there! Thank you!
sonicfighter21354 chapter 3 . 5/31/2017
Brilliant work on this chapter.
sonicfighter21354 chapter 2 . 5/31/2017
Wow. This is thence.
sonicfighter21354 chapter 1 . 5/31/2017
This is an interesting start.
Guest chapter 9 . 5/30/2017
You have no idea how excited I was to see you updated! Thank you so much! Congratulations on graduating! I hope you find in life what you worked for and dreamed of. Again, thank you for the story! May God bless.
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