| Reviews for Clandestine |
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gynger chapter 5 . 5/15/2019 when the smut happening |
samantamax chapter 12 . 1/20/2019 Hi. Just wanted to leave a short message. I just finished rereading the chapters and I conclude once again that I enjoyed the story and wished there was more of it. I know there are short sidewalks on this story that kind of gives a glimpse of what the future chapters would have contained, but those are just some glimpses. It is mesmerizing reading how a man created to be a killing machine struggles to come to terms with attraction to a woman and tries to work around his basic instincts. I can imagine so many scenes playing out in this story between 47 and Arleen, etc. Wishing the best and hoping that there will be a continuation to this story :) |
BenRG chapter 12 . 2/21/2018 Yeah, I'm thinking that Lucas is on a 'do or die' contract. He's probably good enough to give 47 a run for his money. If so, Arleen needs to ask herself why she only ever seems to attract killers! |
YaoiLovinKitsune chapter 12 . 12/24/2017 I really really love this and I hope you update soon! It's a great story an I can't wait to see where it goes! |
xxgunsnroses44xx chapter 12 . 7/12/2017 So when I first read this story, I was cringing at the fact of Agent 47 falling in love with someone but I eased into the story more and more and actually enjoyed it. Is there a second part to this? |
Godiva chapter 12 . 7/10/2017 In so happy that you updated this, please don't hang this for longer, kindly put an update soon...its a great story and has an amazing attraction about it...thanks for the update! |
Ria chapter 12 . 7/2/2017 I loose this story! Hitman is by far one of my favourite games! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
Kalcio chapter 11 . 6/24/2017 YAY! ANOTHER CHAPTER HALLELUJAH. |
Godiva chapter 1 . 4/30/2017 Plz update , it's been quite a while since the last and the story is very good and realistic. Don't leave it hanging like this. Earnest request! |
GODIVA chapter 11 . 3/28/2017 Update plz! |
SheerLuck Home chapter 5 . 3/17/2017 I can really appreciate how you defined 47, the way his Agent skills could come out in everyday life. One example is that he didn't know he could be so delicate when he touches her temple, because in his work he'd need that level of dexterity while working with explosives. It's good that you related things making sense that way, and you conveyed really well how a recluse like 47 could think/behave when faced with anything not pertaining to his daily routine. Anyone who knows this kind of life, shares character traits and behaviors with him (men and women alike), knows all too well how it's like, because it really is like that. All the questionings, second guessing, feelings you're not accustomed to, your rigidity, your own mind constantly chastising you, etc. Therefore to be able to write it as such, you're either one non-social individual yourself or you've done your research/know someone like that. Or it could also come down to the simple fact that you know how to write/imagine things properly. I always pictured 47 to be asexual, he's really the type, and I rarely give into romanticism but your story is fine because of all the above, well-written. Though I dare hope someone in real life isn't as dumb as this woman, her being accustomed to violence and how stupid/violent humans can be; how could she leave her goddamn windows open and doors unlocked? That's just asking for troubles, either she's really illogical and stupid or perhaps she really wants to die. Philanthropists and naive people like her makes me cringe the way she makes 47 irate, yet again you got those details right, like many others. I'm glad I clicked on this despite it being categorized as 'romance'. |
GODIVA chapter 11 . 3/16/2017 Wow! I'm so glad you are back to this! I have re-read this 3 times till now and finally we can move forward! Please keep on writing and don't finish it in a few chapters. Extend to a lot more... Because the concept is beautiful! Thanks for writing and keep on updating! |
chasewilddreams chapter 11 . 3/12/2017 Fantastic! Can't wait to see what's next. Keep writing! |
BenRG chapter 11 . 3/9/2017 FWIW, I'm not sure what Lucas's game is. Does he hope to take down 47 and thus increase his own reputation? Is there an outstanding contract on 47's head (almost certainly) that he's trying to claim? Either way, he's bitten off more than he can possibly chew. Now... I wonder how many lies 47 will be able to make sound like the truth to Arleen's experienced and suspicious ears tomorrow? |
Guest chapter 11 . 3/9/2017 What a great update! Can't wait to read what happens next! |