this is definitely the best vi/jayce fic I've read! i'd love it if you wrote more! it's so hard to find good vi/jayce stuff

This was so good and so funny that, i'm not joking, I immediately created an account on this site just so I could tell you how much I enjoyed it, it actually made my day . :D

Great Job.

Perfect! I loved it!

perfect!

Ahhh-errrr *cough**cough*

I mean nice very nice!

This story was very well written, loved the plot, the pairing, the humor-the everything! Well done!

There aren't many well written LOL fanfics on this site, and let me tell you Summoner you just whooped everyone elses asses with this fic!

Loved how you kept each character IN character! it was a lovely read, and I hope to read more from you in the future! Well not with this story of course since you're done with it... errrrrr ya know wha I mean!

I'm keeping my eye on you! (not in a stalkerish way tho... srry I kno how weird tht sounded!)
-OSM

I liked this very much! Both Vi and Jayce are two of my favorite champions :) And you've caught their characters very well here!

I must say you write very well too, I'm jealous :)

Would have loved to read more though, shame you stopped at three chapters.

A good story with plenty of humor. I love the interactions between Vi, Jayce, and Caitlyn

amazing hope to see moar from you in da future!

Wonderfully done. Loved the personalities you gave the Piltoverans. Jayce/Vi is a pairing I can totally see happening.

Well I thought the story was great. I'm itching for more. I really liked the feel of the characters in this story, but it seems like Caitlyn is just a giant bitch. I understand why shes like that, but there needs to be some lighter moments with her I feel. Where's our steamy hot sex scene? Also, Caitlyn and Jayce TOTALLY have a thing. I just personally don't think he'd be attracted to Vi, but you seem to make it work, so kudos to you on that! Once again, great story, loved reading it, itching for more :)

I'd love it if you'd go in-depth OwO

Perfect. Just so perfect. I definitely ship them together now. They were so in character and with the way you've written this the situations definitely seem possible. I'm just really happy right now after reading this. Wow!

OMG more!

I rather liked it. Interesting pairing, and one that seems like it could work, but never seems to get looked at. Nice job.

Lol.

I'm so stupid I just realized ur the Viper of Grand from the forums. Haha, I read this before but didn't get to review since I don't hav/use my forum account but anyways good story.

Vi is my new fav champ and seeing her not in a lesbian pairing (not tht I have anything against lesbians but it gets annoying how every1 thinks she's one because her boobs aren't showing) is a breath of much needed fresh air. Thank you for posting this story.

And good luck on the Fields of Justice Summoner.

-XM