OMG I love how you involve cougar town in this is AMAZING

Oh, Mon...going to fix Chandler. I want to pat her on the head.

This makes me want to go read the Rachel story, because I need to know in better detail wtf her problem is, because losing old friends is the worst.

It would be cool if you could mash up all of their stories-like a couple chapters from one character's perspective, then from another. I'm sure it would be insanely long, but cool.

God, I hate how oblivious his mom is. And I thought I may have liked Lizzie in to Chandler story, but I don't like her here (though that could be because I'm supposed to like Monica in her own story...).

The writers really weren't thinking of the timeline when they had Monica lose SO much weight so quickly. I'm glad you have Rachel and Chandler say something-in the show, they just brushed right past it, like it was completely normal.

I really hate how much the girls hate Chandler. And I'm remembering more and more about this alternate universe as I go.

Hey, hey, hey. Look at me, doing what I said I would do. :-D

I had to retread the past couple chapters to catch up, and forgot just how dark your version of their stories is, especially Chandler's. And just how much you made the girls hate Chandler.

I kind of loved how the girls think Michelle's dad is hot, even then, lol. I will read and review more soon, promise!

Can you make a separate story about Monica? This one is good, but it focuses on Chandler (and I totally understand why. Its supposed to, duh.) and I think Monica should get more.

First, being fat and bullied should have been more traumatizing.
Also, you could've covered her mom issues more too. Remember when they had the baby shower and Monica really wanted Rachel's mom to like her?
Additionally, I would've liked to see her reaction to being Chandler's trainer and him saying all those mean things to her.

Maybe those can be separate ficlets.

If not, that's fine.

You're a fantastic writer and I love reading these! I know getting everything in the story isnt as easy as it looks. You're doing a great job. I love the Joey one.

I just think you really downplayed Monica's eating disorder. Like she's my favorite character and I'm always looking for a fanfic about her. I liked this one, I just felt like it didn't really do justice. One doesn't just recover from bulimia like that. She doesn't just gain confidence like that out of nowhere. Yes, losing weight would make one feel better and gain a little confidence, but it wouldn't be drastic.

Also, I feel like you could've added things about how she felt after losing all the weight. Like how she started noticing people treating her differently or how she was complimented for the first time in years after she lost weight. Its really a big deal and it got downplayed in this.

But hey this is coming from a former fat kid.

If you do a true story for joey can you, mange him bisexual? Its heavily hinted and Idk i think,it could be canon. Also, I really wished you went more in depth about Monica's eating disorder.

I love the ending of Monica's story and although it parallel Chandler's story, we didn't know that they became the parents to a little girl, but in Monica's story we found out the sex of the baby and her name, I would like to also believe that years later they were able to get pregnant again and had another baby. Excellently written again, you do such great work, it was a little sad reading at the beginning about the little girl Monica was and having no friends, and I always love that she and Chandler actually met as children and she gave him a bracelet when he kept., but the part that really made me cry was when she took all his postcards and threw it into the sea to forget about him, and unconsciously said she loves Chandler when she was with Jason. Reading about Monica and Chandler's relationship through Monica's story was a bit painful because she kept rejecting him before she could let herself get involved with him but all in all a well done story and worth reading again just like Chandler's story. I am partial to this couple rather than the others but I will read them also.

I think that Chandlers character is quite like Matthew Perry idk if that's intentional or not but I like it. I've read Rachels life story, now Monica's and I think I'll read Ross' next. I love these! Btw is Chandlers story scary/sad?

Aww...cute ending to the chapter :)

Happy ending!

Ha, I live in Long Island and never seen a person get mugged before. Poor Monica...

These stories about the characters are the best fanfics I,ve ever read. You should definitely keep writing fanfics.

Brill story should be on tv