Reviews for What I Did Over Break
Night Heartbird chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
I liked it
It was cool
And John is right no one would accept the truth because it was to absurd to believe thef world was saved by 13/16 year olds
destination procrastination chapter 1 . 2/3/2014
SQUEAAAAAAAAAAAAL!
I loved it, best thing eveeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrr!
Hee hee, the only thing that could have made it better would have been John using his God Tier in the classroom. :)
But, yup, that was beautiful!
You write very well. :D
Paper chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
I genuinely enjoyed not too terribly spoileriffic as I job.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
not bad, not bad at all
TheParadoxicalOxymoron chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
I gotta say, this was some pretty epic writing. You got them mad, totes rad writing skills, yo. #Swag #Toomuchswag #YOLO I liked how you improvised with how they managed to save the world, haha! You sure you not actually Hussie in disguise? /Stares at you meaningfully Cos the tricksters are coming to town... -wonkity wink- I think everyone was absolutely wonderful and in all honesty, cannot wait for a sequel to this! I hope that this review actually made you smile! Keep up the good work and I hope to see more from you sometime soon! Catch ya on the flip side!
GothKat2SlashFan chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
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This was adorable Or, wait, no, adorable isn't the right word. It's fluffy and hilarious :3

And I don't like it, I LOVE it. I can't believe this is your first Homestuck story; it's so well written! :O And everyone was in character and just asdfjlfas

I hope you write more, but even if you don't, thank you for writing this (you have just made my day)!
Sporks chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
I did not like it, I LOVED IT. This is really your first Homestuck fic? Everyone was in character and the story was so well connected!
That poor, poor teacher. She is a good person, you guys! She watches anime and everything! Please stop trying to break her mind! Unfriendly behavior, that is.
I love how everyone just throws discretion to the winds after the first few minutes of John's presentation. "You wanna completely ignore what we repeatedly begged you not to do? Fine. But if you're gonna tell the story, you're at least going to tell it RIGHT."
I hope you'll write a follow up to this! And if not, well at least thanks for taking the time to write this one!
TereziWorshipper chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
I loved this story.
It is realistic, and I am begging you to continue this story in some way. The formatting could probably be better, but I wouldn't know that well since I suck at it. The writing itself is excellent, if you ever become a writer (assuming your the average age of homestuck fans) I would gladly read your books. I would really suggest continuing this story in some way, as I love the setting a lot.

Keep up the good work!
-TereziWorshipper