Your Barty is brilliant

It's cute as fuck x3 I love it !

Really enjoyed!

Shame, I kinda liked Snape, but the way you eliminated him is great to read XD

I like to think of myself as an American M. Pomphrey.

once again amazing Siri... Snape deserve that for betrayal

I love this series! As a note thouɡh, the past tense of spin is actually spun. Confusinɡ, I know, but that's Enɡlish for ya.

Great story. I am really sorry to see Snaps die tho. He is one of my fav characters. Oh well! Thank you for sharing!

Awesome!

I love your work in general...but adore the series immensely. Thank-you. {:)5

#cackles# XD

I loved the story as a whole, but chapter four was my favorite part of the entire fic. I won't elaborate because I don't want to accidentally spoil anything, but I'm glad that a certain someone is dead. I'm also pleased that two people are now in love. ;) I'll be sure to read the next part as soon as possible.

Scratch that, spelling as well.

May I suggest typing your future stories on Microsoft Word as it will show you most spelling mistakes such as 'locket', where you typed 'locked' instead? If you don't have that, then just get Grammarly's web extension, it works the same as Word but without the need of Microsoft's software. Another alternative would be getting a beta, I'm sure there are people who are willing to check your stories.

My personal opinion, but the large slabs of text (such as the one within the Embracing Evil: Series 1 where it noted Harry's purchased items) that occasionally occurs are quite harsh on the eyes and memory. When I look away, I sometimes forget where I was, so just remember that in your future stories, unless you've already moved on from that.

I also realise you may have improved since 2013, but on the off-chance that you haven't, please realise and double check your writing. I do think in general, your style is quite good in my opinion, but your spelling and grammar is down in the gutter.

Okay, I was fine with you misspelling 'Parsel' as 'Parcel' but now it's just gone too far. You then wrote 'Goyle' as 'Goyal'. I mean, how the heck could you get that wrong? It's an elementary Harry Potter fact. And now you spell 'Kreacher' as 'Kreature', just... How? I mean, I've never read any of the books, only watched the movies like, 5 years ago and never have since. Just how are you making these mistakes? Are you simply forgetful or do you simply rely on your memories of watching/reading Harry Potter like 8 years ago to butcher their terminology and names like this?

And don't get me started on grammar and punctuation, there are many more mistakes that I can find. Yes, I understand not all people excel at that, but there are simple mistakes that are being made.

If it wasn't for my obsession with the main character of the original content being evil in fanfictions, I probably would've found another fanfic to read.

I'm sorry if I sound rude, but it's simply grinding my nerves. I'm not expecting you to just change it all in one night, but just... notice these mistakes you're making, and hopefully eventually fix it as I'm sure some other people are dispelled from this otherwise lovely fic with your spelling and grammar mistakes.

Gooooooood!