I can't believe I'm only seeing this now on my third read through, but the parallels with Cerise and Mei Hatsume from My hero Academia, that can't be a coincidence right?

Both have Pink Hair, goggles, are inventors, and have quirky personalities that revolve around their preferred research/work.

Ahh! This story is so great! I love all the twists and turns. I can't wait to see Vegeta's reaction to learning his daughter is dating Trunks! I can't wait to see updates. I think my favorite part is the slow romance with Goku and Neka. I also love how Gohan is a very good mixture of Neka and Goku. I hope you're safe where you are. I've really enjoyed the story

When are you going to update this story?

what? a plot twist like killing off dende before they could revive kami and piccolo? im so glad you're happy with your shit-ass plot twist that pretty much kills the mission of using the dragon balls. take a lesson from m night shyamalan. a plot twist doesnt matter if you fuck the story.

does neka stop being an unlikable bitch at any point? or is this just something for masochists to jack off to?

This should be called goku not needed

Hope to read more soon.

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nice! cant wait for the next chapter.

Let me just say first that I came to read this on a whim. There are tons of DBZ videos being recommended to me on YT and it intrigued me enough to check out its fanfictions. Yours got me hook, line, and sinker. Even when I barely know much about the fandom, your writing made it possible for me to still understand it and bond with the characters. That said, are you still planning to continue this? When will be your next possible update? Please, continue this if you can. I really adore it so much, especially Neka (I admit that I do not like Cerise much and I can't feel her chemistry with Vegeta as much as I did between Neka and Goku).

Man...
This is some of the greatest dbz fiction I’ve read in a long long time. I love this and I really can’t wait for you to continue

Lovin the story so far! Especially your treatment of the human characters. Skill and technique mattered a lot in early dragon ball to deal with the stronger enemies that they faced. Solar flare destruct disc and kaiyoken represented this a great deal but sadly that disappeared as the manga progressed and transformations gained the popularity they understandedly received. The cool factor trumped.

Just reread the whole fic for the first time in a few years! Hope you decide to update soon cuz this is a legendary story! I love it :)))

Lookin good so far, maybe have Gohan connect with one of the androids, either 18 or 16. Hopefully you update this soon. I am looking forward to it.

It's really different then other stories and I found it really enjoyable to read. I hope you can come back to this some day and finish it at some point. Even if the main pairing is pretty much done there is still so much to do like Goku reconnecting with Gohan, Vegeta's family and pretty much the rest of this arc and the ones moving forward beyond this.

Hope this is not another one of those stories that are just dropped. Update soon!

i really enjoyed this story up until cerise came in and while this story isn’t my type anymore, it was really enjoyable! i love how you changed the plot up and even your style of writing. i just couldn’t get past the change of trunks being human, bulma and vegeta not getting together, cerise, etc. i hope other people found this book worth the read