I really loved this story! I especially loved the tatted up version of Emma! And I loved how you nonchalantly added the fact that Emma was picking the lock to Regina’s room the whole time! I really loved their instant connection and the great lengths Emma went to in order to find Regina after she realized leaving was a huge mistake!

Looking forward to reading more of your work! Thanks for sharing!

Halfway through this chapter and your Emma is intolerable. She's like a persistent fuckboy. She has no respect for boundaries and expects to get away with it because she occasionally does something decent for Regina. I don't like her at all here.

I just found this, and I definitely look forward to reading the rest of it. However, while Emma seems nice and all, I don't like that she's coming off as a bit of a creep with boundary issues here.

Congrats on the book! Not to be nosey, but do you plan to finish this story when you have time?

Wow, great ending! This is how it should've been!

Wow. What is going to happen?

This is going to be an interesting find.

Emma, you have to find her!

Damn this was heartbreaking, then amazing, then heartbreaking again.

What an ending of the chapter!

Emma knows Regina's son is adopted. They both seem to be aware of what they are feeling, now admitting it to each other. But now that the trial may be over what will happen?

Regina wanting to protect Emma is so sweet and they've fallen so hard whether they realize it or not. I wonder when Emma will reveal the other part of the secret?

The Spanish just turned me into a puddle.

My heart!

Lovely first time.