Hope you find time to update, this really is a good story

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ughh this is awesome! looking forward to the next!

I'm really loving this story I hope you get round to finishing it its really good

If you leave this work I'll slaughter .We are not even living in the same continent but if you leave this amazingly awesome -and most of all that actually writen seriously- I'll find you and you' ll be sorry for dissappointing this new fan of yours :) so no ressure ;D

I will always enjoy this fic. Its so good! I also have a soft spot for MephiShura sooo...

There's a few typos/misspellings, but I enjoyed it! Nice cliffhanger, can't wait for the next chapter!

There needs to be more! More, more, I say! This getting interesting, I just wonder how the present Mephy is taking these new memories coming into play?

Oh dear... x'D I thought you would have made some alterations to the doodle before adding it to the story (is it really part of your story canon that Shura spent a few years being raised by demons?) or moved some of the important dialogue (like the identity of Jormun being Mephisto's son) to another chapter. Please say you won't skip Jormun altogether? He was interesting!

Ah, and maybe you want to change the formatting of the doodle part. When I write like /this/ in PMs that is because the PM system doesn't allow me to put text in italics. I think it would look much better in the chapter if you changed those words to italics - and spelled out the words that the PM system censored. x') Oh gosh I hope I haven't caused a lot of trouble now...

about time you posted again! great chapter too! cx

At the end you are an extremely ruthless writer, not just leave us waiting a long time with the sexual tension of these two, but at dawn jump in bed together. I imagine you should still be laughing at us while you must hurt the stomach. Well but I guess it does because in the end know that readers are all masochists serious ... I was very happy update. I'm intrigued to know if we will see Mephisto with Churchill or to order these demons eaters show their boss (and its true purpose). If you thought about Astaroth truth is that Hitler gives much cannon fodder to play and even though we know how powerful Samael is no doubt that his followers, or the Vatican dontknow his real identity. With respect to the self-restraint of the content of the chapter if it felt like it was not that shameless Shura or female (devilishly tempting for both favorite Mephisto). But I can not deny that despite the existence of the M rating in fanfiction there circulating people on the forum that look like not knowing the implications of this rating and threaten anonymously (because they do not sign your comments) so that the writer must restrict your own story (and yes, your art) to avoid future problems. Still has the support of its readers and please continue the story has a very interesting argument reminds police films.

Awww, I love this chapter. The fluff about killed me, but good to know more about Viktor, too.

...reading the beginning of this chapter with a feeling of "what, that was it?" I'm not expecting smut or anything like that, but I was expecting Shura to take a more active role in the seduction in chapter 14. She bit his lip, pulled him into a kiss, her nails bit into the nape of his neck when she embraced him... and that was that. If I read the seduction scene black on white without my own imagination adding to it, Shura is lying limp like a doll while the roaming hands that take the lead and actually do something are Mephisto's. Where's her usual fire? Doesn't she want to touch him anywhere? Peel off some clothes? Explore his body for sweet spots that will make him shudder and feel good the way he makes her feel? Anything to actually /show/ that she's impatient?

I liked Jormun, though. The plot thickens. :3 And the history geek in me is positively delighted to see some of the political names of the time involved in the story. Political intrigue is the best. x3 Dimitri was a nice touch, too. I like the glimpse he provides into the social matrix of your universe - what kind of creatures there are, how they cope alongside human society, etc. It gives the fictional world substance and flavour. :)

Wow, I... didn't expect what happened at the end of ch 13 (lies I had been praying for it since the first chapter, like why the hell else would I be reading it?), and even though I was hoping for it to go further I honestly thought you'd cruelly put it to an end to the action within a few sentences of the next chapter. I cannot tell you how HAPPY I was that you didn't do that, even though this means I'm admitting to being a total perv- *AHEM*... Forget you heard that.
Ahh, I also wanted to comment on your OC Viktor, like, WOW I have never liked an OC so much before. Most I come across seem thrown into the story and generally just out of place, but he actually enhances and adds something to it. Which is awesome. And props to writing Mephisto the way you did. He even seems slightly younger, though I don't know how you did that. I mean, the difference between 1939 and the present is... Roughly a little over 70 years? (I can't math ugh) A lot can happen in that time, so the fact that he's changed since then is more than understandable. I think I feel the way Shura feels about it lol, because while she knows they're the same person she feels devided on how she should treat him - as the Mephisto she despises, or the one she sees in front of her. I also like that it feels as though her existence in that time could be what truly sparks his interest in Japanese culture and probably why he goes there (I know this is a fanfic and not canon, but damn it's just so perfect, y'know?)

Why has this fanfic not continued? It's flippin' amazing! Please write more chapters!