Okay. Your writing is so amazing. I’m crying right now. I can FEEL the characters emotion. I dunno. I just wanted to say that, because it’s amazing.

OKAY THIS ISN’T REALLY A REVIEW BUT.. THIS IS SO WHOLESOME.

I’m sorry but I could not finish reading. I have been with this story since chapter one and this is terrible please re edit this so I may continue to enjoy your writing. Very sorry if this sounds mean but I don’t understand what happened here.

I’m not being rude or anything, but this chapter was confusing with a lot of grammatical issues and words being omitted. The general point still got across, but I’m just giving you a heads up for that

Thanks for the update. Poor Ed having that type of nightmare but that was just it and nothing more. I hope. That ending was cute witnth Hawkeye and Mustang.

I know it's late but I'm sorry to hear about your grandfather. I have been reading this for the past week and it is sad to have ended like this. I whilst writing this it must have been hard, dealing with college, your grandfather, etc. But I hope that someday you continue with this or maybe start a new fanfic with Edwin or another ship in FMA. Great story and I just hoped to read more.

Please dont be one of those people who make something sooo good but just ends without giving futher notice. I know it takes time n progress but i hate having to see tat we wait for days, weeks, to months, to years just waiting for another n u my friend r not a first of doing this. I give this story 9.5/10 because its the most realistic ive seen so far n appreciate the hard work u put into it but pleassse dont be one of those people who just cuts off

Please dont be one of those people who just cuts off n u my friend r not a first of doing this. I give this story 9.5/10 because its the most realistic ive seen n most romantic but please dont make us wait for months to years n i know its takes time n progress but ive seen things tat r so good but dont go futher on because it just shuts down. Pleaaasssse just make one more futher for your audience.

Yeah Rose! I love her! 3

Well I learned something new today which I did not need to know even though I ignored the warning and now k feel really weird... xD

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NINA! QAQ flipping anime makes me cry so much! QMQ

Damn I wish this was in the manga because dis fanfic is adorable! X3
Also nice dramatic episode, it turned out good. 10/10 work my friend

I would PAY for more of these chapters.. to bad I don't have a bank account. ;(

This makes me feel all warm inside

I loved it through the very end 3