SPOILERS IN THIS REVIEW (again)
I'm done. So When you're in the pack mind you know everything that ever happened to the pack, that is how Leah learned everything so quickly? Whatever. But what kills this for me is 2 things.
1) Leah hates Bella(For good reason) and Lacie(For no reason) yet when Lacie tells Leah that 'everything will be alright' Leah just expects it and everything is fine. One happy pack now. Leah doesn't question anything, "I hate you for causing all these problems but you say everything will be fine so I guess it will be. I have no reason to trust you and have no way to know if what you say will happen but I guess I'll be nice an friendly now."
2) Bella tried to commit suicide and Paul got really mad at her and walked away. Now everything is fine. Don't know why or how it is fine but they're good now like nothing happened.

Harry died and then they had his funeral. how many days later, what happened in between? This story is just to quick, characters changed attitude way to fast (not just Leah), issues seem to get solved 'off screen', and it just seems that no one cares about anything.

This review has SPOILERS for this chapter:
This story has some problems. Well the story itself is alright but the writing is lacking. It is quick to the point writing. Not a lot of descriptions of feels or locations; Things just sort of happen it feels like. This chapter skipped weeks sense Lacie and Jacob met yet it seems nothing happened in that time between anyone. Bella would never jump of that cliff for that reason. The reasons in the book were weak enough but this reason just goes against everything Bella stands for. I had a problem with Paul imprinting on Bella because I mostly like Bella/Alice stories but I was willing to give this a go to see how it plays out. Paul is so hot tempered and Bella is so smart, calm, and logical it could be very interesting to see how it plays out. But like I said weeks went by and nothing happened. There seems to be no conflict between Bella and Paul what-so-ever.

Why was Leah mad at Lacie? I mean Leah phased like an hour ago and suddenly she knows everything? She knows Lacie is an angel; She knows Bella dated a Vampire; She knows Paul called Bella a leechlover in the past? Regardless of all that why would she be mad at Lacie? She should be mad at Bella for bringing Vampires to the res.

I'm going to try to keep going with the story but if it keeps up like this I'll have to quit.

Aahhh Lacie has gotten so annoying. She says she is done with Jacob but them keeps wanting him and the same goes for the Dr Roberts and Mr Howard's. I feel like the last 10 chapter are a repeat button.

I am officailly entrapped in the story

I'm so confused with this story anymore. One minute they like each other now they don't. Also everyone keeps attacking Lacie and is cruel to her. Where are you going with this? Plus I'm confused that everyone believes she's done things she hasn't and gets mad at her when she does. Why does she not leave already? I don't see this becoming a happy ending. In fact, if she was an Angel then she should have Angel friends to help her out doesn't she? It's just that I would think she would leave them entirely. Forks and La Push and everything. Also they say she attacked him. All she did was argue with him. How is that attacking him? Don't get me wrong I like this story, but the longer I read the more I get upset and confused by it. I still want you continue. It's a good story. Maybe I'm the only one confused. Its just that I feel along the way the story took a turn and I have gotten lost by it. This is just my opinion. I hope you continue writing this. You are an excellent writer so I hope my review doesn't get you down.

Interesting chapter. Not sure what to think of this story. However, it does keep me wanting to read and no more.

Are Jacob and Lacie ever gonna get back together?

I don't know if it is Lacie or Jacob but one them is starting to annoy me. Maybe it's there on again off again relationship. Keep up the great writing.

I think Jacob is an ass and she needs to stay away from him and he needs to get his shit together and grow up and beg for forgiveness but don't give it to him and I hope it's a kettle boy and not a girl like shithaed saids it is don't let her give Jacob another chance she just needs to think of her and the baby they both don't need that kind of daddy or his attitude and what it up with that guy mr howard I think there is something going on I just don't no what

This story is good but it has taken a weird turn. I just want the old happy LaCie and Jacob back

I found this story 2 days ago and added it to my follow list right away because it sounds awesome! I no longer read unfinished stories but I'm really looking forward to reading this one. Keep up the good work and Thank you for writing.

I wonder who it was?

Vey well written chapter. I have to say Jacob is kind of bugging me, because I feel like all he cares about is the baby and not even Lacie. I know it's up in the air about being her imprint but I believe that is his imprint as to the council saying she has a mate so he just needs to accept and get back to loving Lacie and get over Bella.

Love it. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Awesome chapter! Somethings not right about Mr. Howard I think Lavie needs to talk with council, also I though she bought a ticket to Italy?