Loved your story. Brilliant job.

First of all, I almost jump to the next story immediately, terribly sorry. Your story was extraordinarily and I basically finished it in one sitting, thank you very much for it. I'm sure there are things to fix here and there but this is a story that I didn't know I needed in my life until now.

beautiful!

well done.

Lovely story... I laughed, I cried... I yelled at the screen in anger at times... I could stop reading. I look forward to part 2.

Beautiful story. I truly enjoyed reading it. Thank you for writing and sharing it.

AAAWWWWW! THAT WAS INCREDIBLE!

Awwwww...that was a lovely ending. I really enjoyed this story. It has the right amount of romance, angst and humour mixed together. If you do write a sequel then I look forward to reading it. This story is on my short mental favourites list with only a few others. While reading, I ended up playing a couple of doll creation games on Azalea's Dolls trying to create Lucy in different dresses. Thanks for writing such a fabulous story, it's nice to see Odin act nicer and less like an ass...it's also nice to see Loki have such a wonderful happy ending. Keep up the fantastic work, you wonderful author! :)

Spirit x

Lovethis story very well written
Love the name astryd too

Really good! I could never write anything like this. Just one thing though... What Lucy can do is not magic. Real people can do that wit thei minds.

I really love this story! I have actually read this story before, but forgot to review, oops. Anyway, this time when I was reading it I caught something odd in the beginning of this chapter. In the first paragraph it says Loki rests his chin on her shoulder but in the second chapter (I looked it up) he says she is "Close to two heads smaller than me at least." If this is true then it would be very awkward, if not painful, for him to bend down to her shoulder. You might want to think about changing it to him resting his chin or cheek on the top of her head or something else intimate like an arm around the waist or something like that.
Oh well, that's my only criticism, other than that one point the story is amazing. Keep up the good work!
Now off to finish my second reading of it!

Reminds me of the end of Titanic when Rose took Jack's last name. :)

Whoever is on the intercom is such a killjoy! LOL

This has got to be the best LokiXoc I've read! I can't wait to read the sequel when I'm not busy!

What do you plan to do when Thor 2 comes out?