| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Unlocked Mind |
|---|
jeannetaylor79 chapter 1 . 3/28 Please be aware of COVID-19. it is deadly and not a prank as Trump tried to tell all Americans. We still have months to go yet with this scourge we are facing. I have been in self isolation for three weeks and don't know what I'd do if it weren't for my laptop and TV. Best of luck. |
X.pix.X chapter 20 . 9/28/2019 Glad that Draco turned good but what happened to him? |
edhuff chapter 2 . 9/2/2019 Hope you still read reviews from these old stories. Really impressed with vows in this chapter! Also love the "Smoke Ceremony" first time I have encountered it. |
jeannetaylor79 chapter 2 . 5/6/2018 The date at this time as you know is 05/06/2018. Ashwinder has not finished her Long Road Home, at least not to my knowledge. I tried many times to get updates but nothing, so I decided to accept defeat gracefully. It was a great fic. Other than the unnecessary repeats at the beginning of each chapter and the careless little spelling mistakes I do love your writing, both as Husker and Sorcerer's Muse. I am reading all that you have written so far and enjoying it all with many thanks. |
Belarus Braginski chapter 20 . 2/7/2017 And I finally cry, for the story is over |
jeannetaylor79 chapter 14 . 1/1/2017 Sorcerers Muse or Husker? A few years ago I read some wonderful fics by a writer named Husker in Exile I do believe. Am I wrong? I am an 84 year old died in the wool HP fan. Not the JKR versions as she only laid the groundwork for the ff writers to write their versions of her concept. I have been reading voraciously for the last 10 or so years. My ship is HP/GW. Not too crazy about Ron and hate the way Hermione is shown to be such a genius. I truly do enjoy your stories but find that you must depend on Microsoft or some other venue to check your spelling and punctuation. I find they are so literal that they aren't aware that there are many words in the English language that have the same pronunciation but are spelled differently. As a young student I majored in English and loved spelling. Many wonderful fics have been weakened by spelling mistakes as one has to take time to wonder what the writer meant to say. Even though your work is a bit serious and deep, I do find that I cannot stop myself from reading. Keep them coming. I didn't mean to be so critical but if you'd had the English teacher I had you would know where I am coming from. |
Talonwalker chapter 20 . 4/20/2016 I really enjoyed the story, Thanks! |
Miss Millie chapter 1 . 3/19/2016 Hello, A great start to a very good story, I was surprised at the drinking though, just friends and families and truth sermon? If kids could ģet it, so why didn't the bad guys have and just ask everyone they caught what they knew about what The Order of Phoenix was up too. Miss Millie |
Miss Millie chapter 20 . 3/18/2016 Hello, I loved the end of your story so much I'm going to start and read it! I'm such a H&G fan thanks for the ride. Miss Millie |
jynx chapter 1 . 2/15/2015 wow I wouldnt put my name on this crap its really bad |
Franklin chapter 12 . 5/16/2014 Why, why, why is Harry SO creepy with Hermione. If she's like sister then thatts one completely fucked up family. |
Franklin chapter 5 . 5/16/2014 Okay this is just rediculous, why not just write a harry/Ginny/Hermione threesome like you really want to and just leave Ron out of it? Harry literally has to be the center of EVERYONE"S universe. He's so pathetic and needy I've start hoping Voldemort does off him. |
Guest chapter 20 . 4/18/2013 amazing couldnt stop reading it |
Nanjo54 chapter 19 . 4/3/2013 Thank you for the wonderful romp. I thoroughly enjoyed the story. If you ever want an English geek to proofread your creations, feel free to contact me. I have a knack for spotting things that spell check misses such as quite vs quiet. Regards Nancy |
Cristin Gryphon chapter 20 . 3/4/2013 So, I have spent a large portion of my day trying to figure out how I want to respond to this two-part tale, and honestly I have mostly drawn a blank. Except for a few small parts I really enjoyed it. You had me worried for a bit near the end there, about four chapters go you made it seem as though Ginny had no hope to live for a short while. Also I think I find the epilogue a bit wanting, I have no idea what would make it better but it does not seem to be enough to do justice to the rest of the story. As a separate point I appreciate you writing it as if Harry actually is on equal footing with Voldemort, it is something I had a major problem with in the original books. In the books the only thing that makes Harry , the one marked as his equal, equal to Voldemort is his luck and honestly I don't think luck should count. Either way you can forget about my rant and rabble there is a lot about the books that bothers me, and I don't need to fill your reviews with it. Thank you for writing an interesting story for me to read. |