They also should have had a scene where the mane five, Spike and Celestia apologize to Twilight. Because they will all jokes to Twilight at the wedding rehearsal.

Thanks for writing this. Also, when Twilight encountered the REAL Cadence in the caves, they should have done a scene which showed how Cadence ended up in the caves.

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I really like this fanfic. Though I feel it could be drawn out just a little more. Like when Applejack encourages Shining Armor, I see her putting a hoof on him to comfort him in my minds eye. The she becomes remorseful when she talks of leaving Twilight to despair but manages a small smile that Twilight forgave her. You could also show Twilight's expression when she first sees Shining Armor, he'd be nervous about she would react after all. A little voice breaking on his part when he speaks to both of them would be appropriate too.

Aww...

So cool that shining apologised to his little sis twiliy

This was cute! I loved it! If anyone flames this, I will flame them! Or will I? I'm just to nice to be mean to others! I have a problem...

This story is awesome! I love it. Shining Armor apologized to Twilight, and all is well, thanks to Applejack! I love this story!

Nice idea of the two reconciling. I like it.

I'm glad someone posted this. I was hoping Shining Armor would apologize to his sister, but I was dissapointed that they didn't show it. :( You did great with this and I hope you get a lot of praise for it. :)

Extremely un-manly tears...

Sweeet characterization, I lurve lurve lurve that episode (episodes), and just... wow.

Thanks.

This was really lovely! I loved this story. Hope you continue to write more stories later is the future. Peace.

That was so awesome very simple and very well written excellent job bravo.