Hey Professor you doing?

I love your stories but if I am honest this character is sounding a LOT like a Mary Sue. You are a brilliant author but please stop and think of what you have here. Do a Mary Sue test.

I hate flamers but can you please take this comment and use it to your advantage. If I think she's Mary Sue this early on then you need to have a close look at your character.

But I still think you have a good idea but you really need to think more about your character.

Yaz