Hey!
I LOVE your story but ... Are you going to continue it? You haven't written a new chapter chapter in ages! So, uh, I certainly do hope that you're still planning on finishing this story. Because it's great!

Update it pleaseeee

Very interesting read, I'm curious where you'll take it! There were quite a few unexpected plot twists which I really enjoyed (Sabo being a prince and even more fucked up then in canon is one of them, I love how you keep revealing new layers in your story), so I hope you come back to this one day. Until then, I'll try to be patient. Good luck writing!

I know you've been gone for almost three years for this story, but it would be really great if you wrote more on this. I just wanted to write this review to show you that people are still reading this and I'll have this on my favorite stories and follow stories forever. You're an amazing and the character development is fantastic. It's a shame that not many people are as into this story. Out of all the AceLu fics that I've read, this was one of the few that were really captured their relationship. Stories that show of a slow burn are much better- and more realistic, than those that are fast paced. Thank you for reading this.

Dear Author,
I really really really love your story so much. This story is really unique and the plot, relationships are so well-written that I would even recommend this story to people who don't even know One Piece. It's just thaaat good. I keep coming back to read it even though you haven't updated for 2 years I hope to be able to read the ending of your story or even just find out about the ending and all the mysteries. No pressure though! I can wait until you feel like continuing this story again. :D Hope you have a good day!

NEXT CHAPTER?

its so interesting im normally not into this kind of fanfic/plot type but ill keep reading

I love this! are you still going to update this? ?

This is honestly the sixth time I have reread this story in the last three years, and as always, I am left feeling completely addicted to your— no, to this version of One Piece and its characters.
I have continually thought back to this, to Divide, wondering what you have planned and how the story will have its closure, 'cause naive as I may be, I will be waiting for the final chapter to come. I simply love this too much to be able to let it go or forget it :)

So it is with shaking hands and a scared heart I write you this review, in the hopes of one day getting an answer to wether or not you will return and finish this masterpiece you started all those years ago *don't mind me, writing like this story has been delayed for over a decade *grins**

Thank you for your hard work, and for coming this far into the story as well as keeping up with all the bullshit life has the tendancy to expose one to, for trust me...as of late, life's been kicking my ass as well, and oooohh what it hurts...*sleep deprived and barely alive*

Much Love,
Shellina, your eternal supporter *am not a stalker, I promiiiisse!*

Btw! I've read some of your replies to reviewers and I saw that you said that they would short SaboLaw moments soon :)))) I hope to see the development of this story and the relationships too. Once again, I really love your story 3

Wahhhhh I really love this story! It's so good and you seem to have every backstory, plot, details planned already. I would love to read and find out more! I re-read this many times already and the more I re-read, the more hints and foreshadowing I discover. You're a really good writer and a story as good as this should not just be a fanfiction. I really like your characterisation of the various One Piece characters especially Sabo, Law and Ace. Very different from the anime/manga but very realistic in your story setting. I really want to find out the reason for Law's betrayal, Ace's past, Luffy's family/past, Sabo's future plans and way more! No pressure but I hope you will not give up on this masterpiece! Thanks so much for the story so far :D

Found a typo.?
Sabo asked, shivering at the thought of Akagami Shanks' furry.
It should be fury right?

OMG i spent so many hours reading this that I should have probably been doing other things, but it was so worth it. This is enthralling, suspenseful, well-written, but best of all somehow wonderfully true to the one piece world. The characters seem so real, and I especially love Ace's brash but bashful nature.

I would love to see this continue, though it's now 2018 so I don't know whether it will happen or not. Either way, I'm so glad to have come across it!

Can you update more, please? This is a really great story and I really want to see what happens next.

This story is just so good! I really want to read more as there are so mamy mysteries that are still unresolved. I want to see more SaboLaw interaction, Strawhats interactions. Its okay if you take a long long time to update! I will be waiting even if its years. Just don't delete this piece of work please :') This story is really the type of story I like and it just keeps getting better and better. The way you write is also excellent. Honestly, if you would write and publish this as an actual story, not a fanfiction, this plot and your style would be so successful. For an international writing assessment test, I had to write a book review and I reviewed this fanfic, changing the names of course haha and I got an A! My writing isn't really good so I think its probably your story that caught the attention of the markers :)