I really hope you come back! I read this story in two days and it really is so good! Please update, you can’t leave me hanging

Please come back to this story and add more to this storyline

Like I said earlier I loved this storyline you did a amazing story Thanks again

Omg how I love this story you r a great writer and thank you and I hope that you had added more to this the HEA love story I will check after I've read the last few chapters of this one and Thanks for taking your time and writing this storyline.

This story was awful.

Wow! I read though it in a couple of days, like I did with FSOG but this one kept me waiting and I just couldn't wait to get some more! Thatnk you PPP of this ! :)

Staying with him after this treatment... I don't know what to say.

I just feel... cheated. I don't hate your story. It's just that... I'm disappointed. Though I don't know what gives me the right to feel dissapointed in the first place. It's just... I really think you would make me love your story. I really considered yours is one of my favs, that's it until... You know. I'm sorry. I think this story is not for me.

Since the J/A scene, every time I read you wrote that your Ana 'fall deeper in love' with CG, my fisrt reaction is to roll my eyes, put my skeptic face on, and sayyeah haha right lol'
And every time I read your CG said he wanted to 'spank that little ass fifty shades of red' I feel like... Wow. Your version of them makes me appalled. Especially Christian. Tell me, do you have a grudge against him?

I'm wary of how you lead me through your story because I'm not convinced to feel safe in this. You make me doubt your Ana, your CG, and your story. Maybe one of the reasons is because of the therapy session scene. I have to disagree the reason she kissed jose is because she wanted to feel if what she and CG have is real or not. Nah, I don't think so. She said, and I quoteHe pulled me into his arms... I should have resist but I couldn't'. Well, she kissed him and she only thoight about CG when she stopped. Is her reason valid? No? Okay, maybe that's her character you potrayed.

And then, it spiralled out of control from that.

I'm not saying this to discourage you. By all means, please keep writing. You writing style is good and easy to follow. I'm just sorry I won't be your faithful reader. But hey, you have a bunch of them out there. Please keep writing for them.

And I want to say thank you for writing this, sharing this even though you gain no profit from it, and so I can read it. It reminds me why I fell in love with the series, why I love their original selves, and why I dislike cheating fics, whether it's Ana cheating or CG cheating. Thank you. You make me realize what ELJ wanted from writing this series, and why she wrote what she wrote. You helped me get a better understanding of Ana and CG's dynamic in the original series, something I really need to validate by reading this kind of fanfic. So, lots of thanks!

Oh one more thing: maybe you should change your summary? I really don't think this is the same Ana and same Christian regardless their situation. Every author who wrote fanfiction is writing their own version. And yours are very, very different from Ana and CG we know and love, IMO. So, they're not the same. Thank you

I just read this entire story in one day. It is great! I love the growth both Ana and Christian have made. It's going in such an interesting direction and I really hope there is more!

amazing love the update

I hope this is not an abandoned story - but I can't help but assume it is since last update was Aug 2019. Can you just update readers confirming one way or another so we can move on and stop checking for updates - just out of courtesy.

I'm loving this story. Please update soon

Please don’t abandon this story. I love this and would like to see all the loose ends completed. There is so many things that you could write. The trip to Mexico, the trip to New York, the wedding. Christian and Ana back together and happy. Maybe even married. They went through so much in this story and deserve their HEA. Thank you for taking us on this journey. You are a very good writer.

Just read the story I loved it I liked the way Christian and Ana pulled the life together after all that they had been through Thank you

Is there more?