can you please update soon

Cant wait for you to CHANGE THIS CHAPTER! Getting so impatient that I've making my own fanfiction based on this. It will be mostly different, in that Spyro doesn't remember what has happened, and that Nova is helping them instead of Tosh. Please get the next chapter out NOW! NEED NEW CHAPTER IMMEDIATELY! NEED RIGHT NOW!11111

Interesting story, I look forward to reading more soon.

Here you go a new reviewer just for you.
Please continue this story i really don't like to have a story unfinished

(Geust of Doom) Ok, I vote Willingly and my three friends vote Forcefully. PLEASE CONTINUE STORY!

Hello? Still writing this AWESOME fanfic? Please? Pretty please? With a cherry on top? :D this is really good. When does Cynder assimilate the universe?

dude, this is awsome!
keep going man, i wanna see what happens next!

(Guest Of Doom) I'LL BE STALKING YOU NOW. I WANT MOOORE! Love it! Stayed up till friggin 12 in da mornin reading. Lol. NEED MORE! MUST FEED!

Nice chapter name by the way. The story is coming along very nicely and it it is very well written, in my option. I want to review your story because you reviewed mine. It is a good story, so keep up the writing.

It's okay if you can't describe it. The story is still really good, keep up the good work. I vote for 1, and The Lizard, stay strong.

I...don't know. You know I dislike this system of voting. becuase I could end up voting for something I actually hate. I actually like knowing what I'm voting for.

So, since I have no clue, I won't vote. *Crosse arms* Sorry, but I'm not going to possibly vote for something I'll hate.

Overall, interesting chapter. Very interesting. *strokes chin* Wonder what raynor will do now?

No. I say don't stab the voo-doo doll. I do not entirely like waht comes from stabbing the Voo-Doo doll. But I hope that maybe a certain 'celestial event', might prove useful to the crew, if you know what I mean.

And if you don't, I'll tell you in the Pm we got going man.

OVerall, nice chapter. Very nice. *nods*

I like this one, it's well written. It could use some extra commas though but other than it, it's awesome. I vote for 1 and no he shouldn't stab the voodoo doll.

Congrats on chapter two bud. I am thoroughly impressed. Be careful on your spelling but still well done. I would like a little more description on the starcraft characters because I have not played the game however I grew up with spyro and am familiar with that. I will also say shorter chapters. Not all stories need to be this long. Most chapters on this site are roughly 2500 words. This will allow you to post more often if you wanted too. Try it out and see if it is simpler for you. I look forward to the next chapter and see you around.

This looks pretty darn aweosme man. a mistake or two here and there, but barely noticeable.

This is pretty sweet. Though I wonder if you're going to make Tosh a good guy, or have raynor turn on him for Nova? Guess we'll see.

I also hope you maybe hook Raynor and Kerrigan up after she's rescued from the Zerg. I relaly want to se ethem together again, although that outcome is looking less likely due to HEart of the Swarm.

Keep up the aweosme work!