I love all of your Wicked stories, always have hoped you'd write a few more, still hopeful now! You capture the characters indredibly well

I really like this. I feel it really brought out the truth of the situation and could have been very plausible. Great job on the characters and story!

Love this chapter. Especially that note that Avaric teased her about everything BUT her skin

Love the conversation between Avaric and Fiyero.
Particularly how Elphie wanted to be invisible to eavesdrop

I love the way this story is, as the ending says, changing everything and at the same time, changing nothing. It makes it more interesting

You're right. Moments like these are fleeting, and short chapters show it off perfectly

This chapter was so realistic; how seeing Avaric again brings back all her old thoughts and memories of him, but as they start talking it changes.

Uh. Morrible is horrible.
But you captured her brilliantly. I love how she thought of Glinda and Fiyero as 'Bubble' and Brainless'

Beautiful once again. He loves her so much, but it still doesn't stop him from worrying about the consequences

What a perfect snapshot of their situation, capturing the love and trepidation all at once

Beautiful. What a sweet, genuine scene

Deep and serious transitioning seamlessly to fluffy and then to steamy.
All around wonderful.

Love how his worrying over her proves to be somewhat of an undoing for her in this chapter

Short, sweet and very deep.
I loved the way you showed her thoughts about her family

Love the way you convey how much he does care for her. And that she is noticing that