i was starting to read all these o'wanda oneshots and i found myself enjoying them, is always good to read this of ian and wanda where theyre expressing their real fears.

it's dramatic :'( but I like it anyway, keep writing!

You know what? You should try a Jamie POV about the relationships around him in the caves. If you don't, I will. (:

Girl, you know who it is. (:
xx

Aww... that was so sad but the concept was so sweet.

I loved the ending where Wanda and Ian were talking.

I love your oneshots! Keep it up!

I liked your one story and went on your profile. Wow you wrote a lot of stories for The Host! Some people would just give up after getting 1 measly review. You should get a beta! Not that you need much help. Just that, if you're really interested in getting constant, trustworthy feedback. I could help you find one if you don't know how. Anyway this was a good story! I felt like you could've added more description in the beginning. Like "I woke up with a gasp. My eyes kept blinking to catch the surroundings of my pitch black room" or something just because it felt a bit too abrupt in the beginning.
...and glance around. "Have you seen Wanda?" I asked Trudy.
You could say ...and glance around. I spot Trudy to my right and walked over to her. "Have you seen Wanda?" Just because the reader might not be expecting you to be in someones company. Again, it's just the abruptness.

You must be getting sick of my reviews now. I see other people's and realise mine are so lengthy. Personally I love this one. The companion to Wanda's nightmare. It shows how much he relies on her, and to me justifies why he worries about her so much.
I'd love to see a Jelanie one-shot. Maybe a conversation between them during a raid or Jared's/Melanie's worst nightmare? You don't have to do anything out of your comfort zone though.
Keep writing :)

I like it! Please please please continue.

Liz stop being good at writing

That was really good! :) Very well written.

I'm a big fan of Ian and Wanda's relationship and you did a great job writing from Ian's point of view. I'd really like to know what happens next. I hope you update soon :)

I'd really like to see Wanda's side of it. I think there's a lot of opprotunity to expand on this story, from both point of views. Who Wanda goes to to ask for help about Ian, how Ian maybe gets upset when Wanda's not there for an extended period of time.. Just some thoughts :P
Overall, I LOVE what you've written. I just wish it was longer. :)