XD is seven years too late to comment on a fanfiction? Sorry I overslept. XD

Anyway, I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed reading this. :) Everything about this story was incredibly well-spoken and detailed. Your title is very professional, your description is very inviting and well-written, and the phrasing of the sentences themselves was so enticing. I was completely immersed while reading this, I couldn't believe how beautifully it was written. It's such a perfect way of storytelling, like gentle poetry, and I was totally entranced while reading it. I loved the way you defined both Link's and Midna's personalities through their behaviors. I very much enjoyed the fact that the format of presentation itself reads in an almost mysterious sort of way, focusing more on the emotions than on the facts/data of the situations and scenes-it really brings out a lot of life for both the characters and the events. I guess I'm in love with your vocabulary and sentence structure and arrangements, they're very beautiful. 3

Anyway, I hope you have a wonderful day. Keep up the good work. :)

I thought it was pretty good

Wow. This was one of the best one shots I’ve read. Your word choice and style are amazing. You are truly a gifted writer who captures the story perfectly.

good job

Wow

This is a truly masterful work of art. Absolutely breathtaking. Magnificent piece of work!

good lemon i dont like graphic lemons either

This was great! I dislike graphic lemons too, and appreciated the more subtle writing.
I think it's great that you provided exposition and character development for the first part of the story.

I have nothing really more to add. Just well written (not just from a style sense, but your grammar and punctuation had no spelling mistakes) overall.

that was the most poetic story iv ever read it was grate

I love this so much. I dislike graphic lemons too; a lot of them just go way too far. This was perfection and the emotions were well-expressed and very believable to that of the characters in the game. Thank you for writing! :)

This is so beautiful. I actually read like, twice a week bc it's my fav.

I myself am not the biggest fan of Lemons, but none the less I found this touching. I would post a review on your other LinkXMidna stories. But I'll just say it here. I love them all x3 and I think your an amazing writer of fanfiction.

Wow... excellent writing! Such emotion you show in your story. How desperate they are for each other. Both feeling a torrent of emotions coursing through them and unable to hold back. Needing each other. Amazing job!

Beautiful. That's the only way to describe this.

I think I'm gonna cry...

dont worry about it! Write about what you would like 2 write about its your story after all