Noooo! I wish this was being continued... Anyway, great story!

I hope u finish this.

Short but sweet!

Whoa, what happened with the sudden decrease in quality?

what the heck?! is that all?!

So far awesome story! I can really imagine it's them talking! I'm a massive Sonic X fan and I'm glad to see Cosmo and Chris are in it! :D

FINISH IT FINISH IT
MY GOOD MAN
FINISH!

i love this story update soon

Abella: This made me die laughing!

Serena: Ignore my stupid baby sister...

Abella: Hey!

Serena: Yes, yes, hello, Abella. We said hi before, remember?

Abella: ...

Serena: Anyway, I love this first chapter! When we go back to read the second one, we hope it'll be as awesome as the first one!

LOL this was cute :)

Sonic's confusion was nicely portrayed, and I like how you did that scene with the guys trying to coax it out of Sonic.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

G

I can't wait for chapter 3! :D

LOL,this sounds interesting. I really love how you kept all of the characters in character, especially Chris :)

I can't wait to hear Sonic's side of this story!

Chao For Now!

G

This is what's on the front page?

I feel insulted. There is literally no plot, anywhere, period. The characters are so OOC, and they do nothing. The grammar could easily be improved in most places.

["Really Amy?" She questioned with wide doe eyes.]
Comma between "really" and "Amy", lowercase "s" in "she".

[Tails blurted out to break the silence.]
So amazingly OOC. It's like you tried. Tails is shy. A follower. He would never do anything that preposterous.

Also, one speaker per paragraph.

The story is nothing more than people talking to each other. The regular dialog runs like so:
Amy: He asked me to marry him!
Everyone: Gasp.
(Repeat several times).

Work harder. Much harder.

explodinghead
Member of Eliminator

I love sonic X! Please write more!