I love it, the idea of Vlad and Danny actually merged inside him. I do love this character.

Actually, Mimi, that's the reason I called Dan "The Ghost" throughout the fic. I was originally going to call him Dan, but I realized that would get extremely confusing. Sorry for anyone who thought it was anyway.
Btw: This is sort of sad, isn't it? I'm reviewing my own story... Oh well...

There is one spot were Phantom is talking about himself in third person.
"Hey, don't call him that," phantom said. I don't think you meant to say it like that, you might put 'Dan' said if you were talking about Dan talking, or if you were talking about Daniel talking (this gets confusing really fast, glad Danielle is not here) changing it to first person would suffice.
I * LOVE * the bickering that goes on between the two.
I really, really, like this story Gurl. So, I will just... favorite this now... :P

Interesting story about how Dark Danny got his Ghostly Wail.

I liked the idea of Dan Phantom having and schizophrenic argument with his component personalities.

lol, tyical Danny and Vlad behavior