| Reviews for The Coming of Emrys |
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zk95379 chapter 10 . 5/19 I absolutely adore this. I think it was really well-written and reality was kept in mind. Not a lot of authors do that ! :) |
Mirror Kyaw chapter 10 . 4/14 dude i want to see other reactions too plz continue |
emrysmorgan chapter 10 . 5/15/2019 This story is so good. Please continue this story. I want to know about how Morgana know Merlin is Emrys. And I really love if Merlin with Mithian. |
emrysmorgan chapter 7 . 5/15/2019 Did Gwaine know about Merlin magic? He talk likes he know what Meelin do. I really love how Lancelot try to communicate with Merlin. He is so understanding. I love to see when Lancelot protwct Merlin woth his own life |
Quill chapter 10 . 2/11/2017 That was splendid and marvelous. Well done! |
Quill chapter 3 . 2/11/2017 Oh goodness. He wakes up at last and this happens. |
wryter501 chapter 10 . 5/10/2016 i love that acknowledgement of their similarities - both of them set apart since birth to be /different/. both of them affected - adversely, it can be argued - by the purge and the ban. also i like arthur conceding merlin's point about /having/ to keep the secret, understanding and forgiving, rather than demanding, why didn't you tell me... well done - i very much enjoyed the last story and this sequel! |
wryter501 chapter 9 . 5/10/2016 merlin's waking up was the perfect mix of cute and comical - sweet and poignant, and again - /not maudlin!/ yay! |
wryter501 chapter 8 . 5/10/2016 that letter. just... wow. it was awesome - funny and matter-of-fact and yet sentimental, too, without being maudlin... perfectly merlin. :) (and, a good way to do a reveal!) (ps, 'all that i was able to do b/c of you' - i think that's a point people miss sometimes, what arthur gave back to merlin, his purpose and his accomplishments b/c of doing them for arthur or with him, or whatever...) i love gwen. 'forgive him, arthur, and let him rest in peace...' she's so lovely. |
wryter501 chapter 7 . 5/10/2016 love merlin's conversation with freya, worried that each time he kills, it becomes easier to resort to, the next time - and dying now will prevent him from becoming a 'monster'... seems like that's a warning the cailleach should have given them at the time - that if merlin died young or violently, it would be ten times worse... |
wryter501 chapter 6 . 5/10/2016 merlin has this way of telling the truth that makes it sound ridiculous - and coupled with the crazy excuses he gives, is it any wonder arthur doesn't really believe him?... poor oblivious arthur. poor underestimated merlin. interesting little moment with uther dying, and kilgarrah watching him go... interesting also, that kilgarrah can heal him in the dream... |
wryter501 chapter 5 . 5/10/2016 (one of arthur's more amusing orders - i am prince, i command you to get me some trousers! :D) i found myself wondering, if merlin believed he was dying, and yet had connection to arthur in the dream - if he might not tell him of his original, innate magic... |
wryter501 chapter 4 . 5/10/2016 wow, again. death-dream conversation... |
wryter501 chapter 3 . 5/10/2016 hooray for gaius scolding arthur! i love that his age and expertise in medicine give him this authority! typical arthur backhanded gratitude - thanks very much merlin, but if you do it again, i'll have you in the stock. *shakes head* oh, arthur... and geez-oh-pete. oh, merlin, too... |
wryter501 chapter 2 . 5/10/2016 wow. great scene, merlin possessed - and what's more, b/c he allowed it, more or less, to prove to arthur he was telling the truth. arthur really needs to realize how important it is to merlin that he takes him seriously. (how about brownies with white chocolate chips?...) |