WHERE IS THE PRODUCT YOU HAVE PROMISED?!

I liked this I thought it was really good.

I really enjoyed this, especially the different narrator's perspective. It makes it feel immediate and keeps the pace swift. Would like to see more!

This is a great start...where's the rest?

Love that you had "you" in it, very different from a lot of the fics I've read.
Hope you continue because this is really good so far!

Can I just tell you how much I love you for this? Because I love you for this. A lot. Not only is this the type Dragon Age fic I want to read-but you've based her of Arya. ARYA. My favorite, favorite Game of Thrones character ( well excepting Tyrion...but...well they're pretty much dead even.) It's like you read minds. Do you? Do you read minds?

While "Alistair and Cousland try to produce an heir" has been done, that doesn't mean there isn't room for another one if it's good, and this one has potential. I like your Cousland's voice, and I'm interested in seeing where this goes!

Yay! I love it, it's so cute, and I thought of Arya before I even read your note!

Even if a fic premise has been done before, it doesn't hurt to do it again. Write on! The more the merrier.

So, I've been reading all your Avatar: The Last Airbender fics, and enjoying them all thoroughly. Imagine my surprise, when I see a Dragon Age fic with your name on it! I love the games, so I'm excited to see you stepping into a new fandom.

In any case, this is lovely. I've romanced Alistair quite a few times myself (though, I think Zevran will always be my one true love), and your Cousland is fun. I like the second person POV, it's different. I'm excited to see where you're going with this.

Thank you for your words!
-WNW

Nice beginning! Welcome to the fandom :-) Well written, Rated M, Alistair-centric fare with a Warden based on Arya Stark is always welcome, says this DA fan.

I am so excited for this :DD I can't wait to read as your cousland who I wholeheartedly agree can be a complete Arya Stark (or at least that's how I played haha). I already sent you a little fangirling blurb about this on tumblrs, but know enough as a writer too that reviews feel great haha

OK NOW YOU ARE OFFICIALLY MY FAVORITE AUTHOR ON THIS SITE.
YOU MAKE AWESOME HP, AVATAR FICS?! AND NOW AWESOMELY FLUFFY AND JUST IN GENERAL AWESOME DA FICS? TOO GOOD TO BE TRUE!

I now follow you on tumblr too! (i saw this fic on tumblr after looking through the DA tag) and OMG i am so happy right now! There are too little authors writing DA fics these days! So glad you decided to make one! I LOVED it! :D