Really good, please do more.

I love this plz continue

I liked this story it was good, but please continue with many people finish the stories it's so sad!

U should do frazel

I love storys about the kids of the seven :)
Aw, Percy and Annabeth are cute, i love Percabeth
Oh cool, their son is praetor :D
*sigh* Aaron and Selena are kinda cute, but the "We-don't-like-each-other" thingy makes it difficult...
Please update soon

Really good so far! Your sentences are a little long, though. Update!